loveing the stoey so far but in my opinion you could have shown how some of the time of the erly years with anko and naruto

When did Naruto find out about being a Jinchuriki? He didn't know earlier. Ino's eyes are blue. By the way, can this be a ShikaTema? I think they'd go well together and I love that couple.

You know, I would want to say this to Shino... "I'm so sorry you have to be teamed up with 2 annoying brats. You are so strong to still keep your cool with them. Again, I am so sorry."

it is great. would love to read more

Love the story!

You misspelled Jiraiya and the word "Sasuke-kun".

Okay, you've done a good job with this story so far, there are only two things. One the Third Hokage, would not reveal the truth of Naruto's parentage so easily, to protect him from the Yondaime's enemies. Also...your spelling sucks...really, really badly. Also you are really, really, really rushing. Work to improve those three things, and the story will be a lot better.

i love the story but why the fuck has it gone dead?
i mean seriously,you haven't updated in 1 year and 1 day!
why wont you update? WELL?
but other than that...still loving the story!XD :) :P :D X) XP _

Great chapter! Love Hinata kicking Sakura's butt.

Please Continue!

I just noticed something. When Naruto sees Gaara for the first time it hints that he knows he is the vessel of Kyubi, but I don’t remember reading him being told or finding out about Kyubi. Is that going to be a flashback later on or what?

This is an awesome fan fic! OK, concerning your request about the exile fan fic, I would love to do one, but it would have to wait until i finish the one i am currently working on.

the story is great you just need someone to help you like a beta.

if you need one send me a mess on i'll be glad to help

i want more please

it was greatly enjoyed.