This chapter was pure poetry.

I love everyit of your story!
Stupid crazy Lyric and a touch to naive Abby, i think she shoud look for a nice girl or atleast somebody like Tim,a nice person- but she really has a thing with bad boys...

And poor Tony, this stupid rotten piece of meat that touched a childe, takes away there pourness, the right to be a naive childe..., why did Tonys father did not see this, why do some parent close there eyes?
i think when i have a childe she/he will learn from 3 year on, one or more self defence lessons- like karate, kung fu, weaponless-defensive technices, and i will bring when it goes to school the first time some police officers and a psychologist there at first day so that they know and learn what to do, where to go for help-and the same in 5th grade. i think that has to be a day lesson for all schools all around the world!
I hope this piece of rotten meat did got or will get what he deserves!
Ziva will be good for Tony, and when this scume who did this still lifes, she has some nice technices to really hurt him...

Oh wow, loved the introduction between Abby & Dante, knew she'd handle it well when she saw how protective Dante is of Timmy. That's the one thing that would make her feel better about the whole thing. Thanks again, loving this one, even if I am a bit late reading it lol.

Hi, I've just run across this little gem, and so far, loving it! I love the idea of a powerful Timmy and can't wait to read the rest :) This is my fav chapter so far, awesome stuff for Timmy, and Dante is good for him :)

Oh dear, Dante's found the HSN? That's hilarious.

Oh, this is so sweet. McGee is totally cute, and he really is just perfect, isn't he? 3

This story is amazing, thank you so much for spending 11 months writing it.
I cant wait to start reading the sequel :)

o_O. . . what the hell He cut open his…..and put little beads inside? WoW. . right now I'm like a deer in head lights

interesting fic.;D

a love story of an angel and a demon.i like it.

OMG Abby and Tony have totally broken the cardinal rule of partying with friends. You never let you friends go off with a complete stranger you are supposed to watch each other's back.

*Bravo, bravo* Gives standing ovation! Excellent story, congratulations! Now I'm going to read the sequel!

Sniff...Tim is an angel. A REAL angel. So he's not all human any more, so he's the one no longer alive? I'll read on and see. And also how Dante escaped his coffin to rescue Tim.

OH NO, that last sentence...

OH NO! TONY NO NO NO

Uh oh. Jane isn't Antonia, is she? OR she was the one that Lyric tore apart in Venice. And Abby, Abby Abby, you'd better hope that Tim & Dante DON'T stay away that night!