| Reviews for Crush |
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MidnightxMusic chapter 1 . 10/15/2012 LOL this is now my favourite one-shot! xD It kept me laughing throughout the whole thing, and the ending, oh god, was perfect. Silly, silly Riku. xD I'm disappointed that more people didn't favourite this story. D: |
SkullszEyes chapter 1 . 2/21/2011 That was soooo Cute! Some reason I could always see Riku as a simple loser! ahaa :D Love him tho! He's awesome ahaa |
Melyx chapter 1 . 5/20/2010 lul i like this! . through the whole thing i was like 'kisshimkisshimkisshim!' But, i'm glad he didn't. Coz that'd be so. Typical. And not awesome. SO YAY for you being awesome! :DDDDD |
always-kh chapter 1 . 4/25/2010 lolz i had to laugh at the situation. and riku being such an ass. |
Illyric chapter 1 . 1/15/2009 I loved it! I literally lol'd. Cute, incredibly funny, and good job. Is it planned on being a oneshot, or will this evolve into a story? |
forgiven4ever chapter 1 . 10/22/2008 Excellent writing and true to the pairing, Sissy. I do believe Sora had a crush on Riku and Riku's straight. lol. Poor Riku. Poor Sora. Not wild about the slight yaoiness in it, but it was funny. Luff ya, Sissy! Happy Birthday! |
youkai chick supreme chapter 1 . 10/6/2008 omg! sque! this is the nicest thing i've ever been "given"! you're a dear. and i'm so excited to be reading this! poor sora! (never thought i'd say those words.) riku was an ass. like a horrible ass, but i kinda liked it for a change from my riku. there was a nice little, super subtle bit of angst at the end. i liked the moment riku realized who sora's crush was. the beginning was a little bit weird. i struggled to realize who was "talking" at first but after the first two paragraphs it picked up nicely. also, i noticed only a few, minor typos. so yay on that! ...poor sora. never, ever thought i'd say that. but riku was such a homophobic as (and a bastard of a playboy to boot. damn). . i loved it though. humor though? well, i kinda see it. but i see it more as a friendship "romance" kind of thing. great job though, i loved it! i am so happy, you made my day a million times better. |
punkiemonkie chapter 1 . 10/5/2008 Lol, the ending is priceless! “Oh. Dang.” Haha. Riku is slow. XD I know I’ve been terrible about reviewing your stories lately, so I thought I’d read this one. It’s…well, not what I expected, but certainly interesting. I figured Riku would be the one that was gay. Not because he seems gay to me, but just because in the game Sora and Kairi are pretty much matched up, so that leaves Riku the odd man out. I don’t think Sora is gay (do you? O.o) but I like the concept of the story. I think a lot of teenagers go through that stage, and they need support to overcome it and realize that it’s normal. I noticed the line, “simple and clean”, any relation to the song? Hehe. I love Riku’s rant about homework, it’s so true. And he loves his sexy hair, lol. XD Most people probably won’t get this story, but I think the concept is nice. It’s got a message. _ Anyway, I for one liked it, and I’ll try to be better about reviewing more of your stories. Ta ta for now! _ |
SecretAgent99 chapter 1 . 10/5/2008 This was interesting...It was written well, and I'm glad Riku wasn't the one who was gay. I thought it was really funny at the end when he realized who Sora liked, especially since Riku made it apparent that he only liked and will forever like girls. |