Reviews for Don't Laugh |
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Yami Neon Crayons chapter 1 . 9/2/2010 OH MY GEE WAS THAT HOT! man I think im all hot and swetty from readding that! you gotta write a sequel of that but in revers were Matt is the master and Mello is the pet\toy lolzz |
me chapter 1 . 6/24/2010 :P well...that was hot... XD excellently done |
Red Roses Turn White chapter 1 . 11/3/2009 gorgeous! hot, sexy yada yada yada. loved dom Mello, great work. and for the record... i hold with those who favor ice... the world may burn but not for love. |
foreverunloved chapter 1 . 7/17/2009 - Loved it, it was great~ :3 I see no flaws, BUT '... I would have added in a chain leash XD but thats just cuz I love those things ' and in you put them on a certain way they they can be used like a choker XD and thats fun to use with M&M XD |
kakkujapojat chapter 1 . 6/5/2009 OMFG - I think this is one of the BEST Mello x Matt lemons I've ever read xD My friend sent me the link, and we both thought it was hilarious xD (well, I thought it was hot, too - but she just found it funny). For the rest of the night, we called each other "Master" - it was quite amusing xD Anyway, this was quite an original little fic - sure there are many where Mello forcefully dominates Matt and ties him to the bed, but I think the vibrator part made the difference here xD Good job with creativity! I enjoyed reading very much x3 |
miss atari chapter 1 . 2/5/2009 this is quite possibly my favourite one shot ever, as far as Mello and Matt are concerned. great job. i loved it. |
Free of Mundane Thoughts chapter 1 . 1/9/2009 Yay for kinkiness and wow. And wow again. And omg you need to write more where this came from. Because it was that amazing. |
Kit-Kat Punk-lover chapter 1 . 10/8/2008 Oh! That was HOT! I love the kinky sex :D! Way to go! Love it! |
MelloxChocolate chapter 1 . 10/8/2008 i liked it a lot, very hot and i liked their relationship, its cute |
Shikirou chapter 1 . 10/6/2008 The very ending made me giggle. c: This story was very hot. :D I was hoping I'd find a good fanfic story before I went to bed. Bahaha. I think this deserves more reviews. -Shikirou |
Sexykill69 chapter 1 . 10/6/2008 *can't speak* *q* *drools & slaps self across face* |
C Elise chapter 1 . 10/6/2008 bad Matty! |
MelloisMellow chapter 1 . 10/6/2008 *Drools* That was hot! Thank god for lemon and yaoi! |
flamablechoklit chapter 1 . 10/5/2008 good lord. you saved me from an ever mounting sea of badly written fan fiction. -hugs- and thank you for showing that Mello is not some demented rapist. he gets portrayed as such much too often. |