This was good.

Very nice story. I love the plot. Robin and Marian's childhood is a subject that BBC didn't really deal with. I would like to think that this is how it happened.

Love the plan. but it goes wrong, doesn't it?

We shall see.

i love this story!

so good!

I enjoyed this quite a bit, thank you!

O, nice, I like that last bit: 'as Sherwood Forest swallowed him' nice touch.

PLZ UPDATE

Rache

love it! the fun's just begining!

Fantastic!

I'm almost sad to see it go :(

But hey loved the story

It was amazing :D

yay! u updated! i cant tell u how long i had been waiting for...well...since u last updated that is lol...but love it! i simply love the story!

i bet marian's going to be indifferent to him when he comes back and tht ud make robin more restless and frustrated than ever! Excellent parts :)

wow...awesome few chapters...you certainly turned up the intensity with that last scene between Robin and Marian. It's exactly how I imagine it would have went. Please update soon!

I've been enjoying this story tremendously. I have a feeling that we have not yet heard the whole story about what happened between Robin and his father. You are doing such a fine job characterizing Marian and her response to Robin's choice. Great job!

SAY YES U STUPID &*(

Wow that was amazing!

So well written

I loved it :D

excellent story!

brilliant.

loved the Robin and Marian scenes

please keep up the good work!

Oh a double update

Loved this chapter!

Even if it wasn't a completey happy one :D

Looking forward to more