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theNewDesire chapter 1 . 11/8/2008 X3 Cute! and a little sad too, but in a really sweet way. |
Shadow Hylian chapter 1 . 10/6/2008 I really loved this poem; you've got Hugo and Dante's personalities just right. I love the cuteness and angst of this pairing, and I think that this shows through your word choice. I think that the lines "You coddled me, Now I'm your guardian" and "You coddled me, Now I'm your guardian" are really profound, highlighting the complicated nature of their relationship. I also really liked the "Maybe there is more to master/puppet" line, as it adds an interesting dynamic to their relationship. Overall, exellent work! _ |