I really like it. It's really dark and difficult to read because of it and you are a good author. Please update soon . Please please please!

Holy shit. Just...You've tackled another dark subject matter, and it's...*sigh*. I really really hope there's a light at the end of this tunnel because the way it's looking now, it's not looking too good. I know Itachi agreed to help, but it's still up to the courts, and the courts are pretty fucked up sometimes. And I like the way you bounce back and forth between the present and the past. Sometimes, it frustrates me because I want to know more about one or the other, so when you switch I'm like, "wait! But what happens!?" It keeps me reading haha :) Another great story in all matters of characterization, spelling, grammar, and interest!

I've been reading fanfictions for years..and your 'cruel fate' is the best-first choice! whenever I'm in the mood to read something your fic comes to my mind..it's perfect. I've read it numerous times..probably 50...I'm just starting to read this, but after reading reviews I realized this is not complete..I don't read WIP stories, probably abandoned but I hope you'd update this soon...because you're an amazing writer, I know I'm gonna love it...Please update...

More, please give me more. Send whips of it down my back, give me more.

I confess, you've got me snared and captured please don't give this fic up but of course you aren't obligated to if you can't finish it. I REALLY enjoy this so far

Please update soon! :)

This is currently my favorite fanfic! Oh my god, I cannot tell you how much I really really like this story. Okay, I thought I reviewed this a while I ago, because this has to be my 6th time rereading this, it's soooo goood! I like the premise, and the characterization! And holy shit, just incredible. I do like the way you put the characters in certain places in this story. Shouta would be my secret guilty pleasure in fanfic so underage!Iruka with Kakashi is hot, and I do like that he's not too young, but still underage! My favorite part is when Iruka was distressed about Kotetsu and he runs to Kakashi, and then the whole way that plays out from there, and how Kakashi gives in to his "alternate persona" for a bit, but then he realizes, I also like that the next chapter you mentioned the tape, because when the scene took a turn for the sexy I was like 'wait did he switch off the tape recorder?' and I really like Jiraiya here, and how he immediately goes after Kakashi when he knows what happens. Also, I do really like Izumo's scene here. And I like that Kakashi is "human" and is effected by Izumo and Iruka showing affection towards each other (if only I could draw! I would totally draw that scene). Another little scene I like is the Sai and Danzo thing early on, I dunno, I really like how you show what's happening to non-main characters in this situation.
And that last chapter! Holy shit! Like, poor Sasuke and Naruto getting dragged into this! And then we see Obito, and how Kakashi is disillusioned with him. I really liked that Itachi was convinced to help Iruka's case! It brings us back to the beginning.
And Man! I just wish there was more of the fanfic. I'm engulfed in the story, emotionally attached to these characters, and I can't wait to see what happens and how it will end, if it's updated. Usually I try to read only completed stories because the whole unable to handle anticipation. I'm so glad i read this, although it's incomplete, it's just so damn good!

PLEASE continue on with this story. It has been a long while since a story has touched me as yours has. I'm a reader as well as an actress, so whatever I read is acted out in my mind as I read. I am so enthralled and involved in this story that I feel as if I am right there with the characters,feeling there pains,their happiness, their hope, their despair, their fear, their terror, their love. I'm a natural empath, so it's usual for me to identify with how others feel. But with this story...my goodness. It is so rare to find an author who can write angst as well as you do; your writing isn't overly complicated, and in its simplicity it captivates me in a way that very few stories can.

Therefore, I hope that I will be able to one day (hopefully one day soon ;p) check my alerts and see that this masterpiece in the works has been updated and will indeed be continued and finished. I look forward to reading a new chapter. :)

-Rin's Adoptive Mommy

Please update,this is good.

at first i wasn't sure how i would feel about this lol i'm not a fan of shouta so i was a bit apprehensive (since that usually means actual children up to age 12ish, not just a teen or minor) but i liked it! they're really not much different age than they are in a lot of fan fics or even the show. i see it's been forever but you should totally finish this! i'm sure you could do it quick! :D

This story is fucking great! I love it! The way you develop the characters is incredible!

Just wondering, are you going to continue writing this? Your last post was almost 3 years ago? Please please do!

I dont know why I keep on reading this sick story but it's so addicting and I guess I just love the relationship between Kashi And Iruka. I want to see more of it. Please continue.

All my love,

FallenAngelFromAbove,

Simone Riddle,

:*:*:*:x

Wow, this story is amazing! Very powerfull!

I hope you update soon... -sniffs-

Great fic. Are you planning to continue it? I really think it needs another chapter. (Can you tell I am trying to beg?)Please think about writting another one. It is getting really good despite the darkness. Hehe. Thank you for sharing.