Reviews for The Beat
Norrsken chapter 10 . 6/14/2013
Dear Vampire Reader,

Now I have finished this tale and I like Sam very much. He is a good friend for Mike and his family is interesting and endearing. I enjoy reading about Indian rites and customs, also the more mundane family life.

The tale is dramatic and engaging. You actually made me gasp when Grandma Birchtree's house exploded. The conflict is very serious. I was happy that it had a *peaceful* solution. Matthew will become a very good shaman with the help and tutoring of his family and friends. He is a good diplomat and I can *see* him in his youthful insecurity, growing more confident as he talks to the gathering.

I like your descriptions of nature and forest, also the interactions between Sam and Mike. I can see that they will become very good friends in the Future.

All the best wishes and many thanks for sharing,

/ NorthernLight
Norrsken chapter 5 . 5/25/2013
Dear Vampire Reader,

The Beat is a very exciting and interesting tale. I enjoy the Moonlight connections, I remember that part of the series well. Sam is an endearing and engaging character. His shaman connections are a treat, he has abilities that are way beyond what he himself believes. He is very open minded regarding vampires and I would like to meet his Romanian friend, too. :) I am glad that Mick befriends him, it seems that this was meant to be. I like your telling of their time together and their mutual interests. Their ride and your nature descriptions are enjoyable to share.

All the best wishes and looking very much forward to reading the rest of the tale. Will be back with more R&Rs next weekend,

/ NorthernLight
a wolf is a perfect paradox chapter 10 . 4/7/2010
o just finished the story, read it all in one sitting, sp proud!

i just found them through another author and started into it, once i get hooked there is no stop!

i like what you have done so far and cant wait for more!
FrozenDrifter chapter 3 . 5/7/2009
Just read Chapter 3, and it's good. I just wish to find out more about Sam-such an intriguing character.
FrozenDrifter chapter 2 . 5/7/2009
Another good chapter! Keep writing :)
FrozenDrifter chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
Sam is a very interesting character...I'm liking this first chapter.
nerak109 chapter 10 . 3/11/2009
Really enjoyable, loved the feel of your Native American foward to reading the rest of the series, thank you.
Emerald72 chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
This was very very well written, and great characterisations as well. Excellent Fic, well done :)

BTW I saw other reviewers referring to you as Penina? are you Penina Sprinkle on other boards? If so, I know you're work and have always admired the way you write. :)
10thandrose chapter 3 . 2/17/2009
I like this a lot so far. Sam is really a unique character.
Nocturne in C Moll chapter 10 . 2/11/2009
Great story, Penina. Very original and insightful.

Looking forward to the next.
Nocturne in C Moll chapter 8 . 2/11/2009
Another intense chapter...
Nocturne in C Moll chapter 7 . 2/11/2009
Wow-exciting chapter! On to the next...
Nocturne in C Moll chapter 6 . 2/11/2009
"'How long can an eighty-five your old hang on?'

Hanging onto the tree, I wondered about that myself. As long as I need to, I told myself."

Hilarious.
Nocturne in C Moll chapter 4 . 2/11/2009
"Did you get a normal call or did your grandma send you some kind of mental message, to tell you to come here now?”

“She called me on my cell a couple of days ago."

I found that highly amusing.

I'm intrigued as to how Mick and Sam are going to help each other...
Nocturne in C Moll chapter 3 . 2/11/2009
The bridge thing was amazing.
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