This is terribly written. No writing skills at all.

Awwwww, my heart, this is such a cute story!

How do you pronounce Emerica?

Your characters are so OOC. Merlin/Myrlinna took being hit so easily? Arthur is ABUSIVE? Morgana thought Arthur was ANNOYING.. why this possessiveness? Gwen was almost raped... where's the trauma? Seriously dude

Um.. is Arthur such a jerk that he and his friends were going to GANG-RAPE a girl? And even then didn't he respect women.. a WENCH? Oooohkay.. I'd like to see the character develop

One of the best female Merlin stories. i you really really love it and, I hope you will write more in the future. even thought I think you wrote this a while ago.
love and appreciation,
Marauders_for_ever

j'ai adoré et je te remercie pour tes efforts, ta persévérance, ton inventivité, en bref, pour tout les efforts et pour tout le temps que tu as mis dans cette fanfiction.

Please don't be angry with me. I love the story, the plot, the premise... But terrible grammar, poor spelling and sentence construction almost had me quitting on the story. The story itself? flawless. The construction? Leaves much to be desired. I would suggest to get a Beta for any future stories. Oh.. and research lots and lots of research. You've changed Sidhe to She for the spelling, and the sidhe are a very important part of the Old Religion myths. The church? Eh... did not fit the time period. In season five the Saxons still existed and the holy inquisition only started like 5 centuries give or take after the Saxons were gone. The "holy grail" inquisitions that most Arthurian legends are connected to is a part of the Catholic church trying to make it seem a holy work. Sorcery and the Church does not go together. The story focuses on Merlin or in your case Myrlinna, so the church should have minimal to no presence in the story at all.

I love your story more than some others. Pretty straight forward, it's just you needed more research on the material and of course construction is at an essence.

Holy. Freakin. Punctuation. Good story so far but you need to get a beta.

Best fem/Merlin I have read, love the ending with all there kids and the owl,

I love the sword in the stone reference

I would say do it :d I'm admin of the page of Knights of Camelot. We want the post your story in our page. What do you think xx You can send youre answer to this emailadres: xx Lady Tati

Aww what a wonder and great story! such a happy ending!

This was really good :D

oh my gods I absolutely adored this story it was so good!