Please continue this. So great!

I love this. Please keep going.

great story you should really write more

I thought I had reviewed this story, but I was wrong.

Really loved it since the first time I read it. Love it's pace, the way you develop the characters and how you show the different sides of both protagonists. One thing I liked a lot is that the amount of fantasy and myth you put into the story, nice way to work out the plot. At the same time, quite surprising about who the traitor is, didn't expect it although you hinted it, just wow.

I know you are not updating it, I should read your profile first... But well, lol. Hope everything is all right and at some time you will be able to release a new chap.

Keep the great work, and thank you for this beautiful story. :)

Question: Do you play WoW? Because if you don't the fact that you named a dragon Alexstrasza kind of creeps me out. lol Good story, you should think about updating it. :)

Very nice. I love this story. An ending would be most helpful if possible. I can imagine a great last few chapters before it ends.

Very well-written!

hey, great story:) love the story so far. Keep up the good work! xx

wow you changed it well keep it coming and update again soon

great update! it's nice to see this one back.

hey i really loved this story...all the fluff between van and hitomi, the way it should be. hope you update this story soon. :D xx

Sometimes Van is just stupid and also very over-protective. But that's just him I think.

Great chapter as always!

I hope to read form you soon

hug you

jacks-peapod

Keep it coming!

cool chapter... bye now...

The dragon was really cool!