I like this story a lot!But I feel like it should be an NarutoxOC pairing and NOT with sasuke since he's a a**(I apologize in advance to any sasuke fans reading this):)

I personally like this story and think it deserves more positive feedback,hopefully you'll update soon!x3

Sorry I haven't read this story in awhile but I've been reading other things and whatnot. I still enjoy this story and look forward to the next chapter whenever you should post it.

~jinxed

This is SO boring. It's so slow and there isn't any. Action in it whatsoever.

Er, I'm guessing (hoping, actually) this will turn out to be SasuOC? I enjoyed it. Nice use of an already existing Kekkei Genkai.

I absolutely love Amaya. She had this calm personality that's not as cold as Sasuke, but not as mellow as Shikamaru. Like, in between I guess, since she has her exclamation point moments.

Hmm, I think that Naruto is actually starting to like Amaya more than a friend, but continues to hide it by using Sakura as a excuse. What do you think of that? Or Maybe Naruto is starting to look up to Amaya as a mother figure. Who knows.

Update soon.

I loved this chapter. I love the whole story, really. It's great. Update soon. _

I like it so far. _

Update soon~!

Nice chapter, and thanks for the update! That quip about Shikamaru was pretty funny. He's one of my favorite characters... please update soon! (Oh, also, update With Bated Breath soon as well. I really like it.)

D8 You really skipped around in this chapter... didn't like that too much.

But still a good story.

Great update, I loved it! Keep up the great work.

Awesome! Update again soon. I like how you don't write about every single event, like the Zabuza fight. After reading so many variations that end up the same way, it's a relief to just skip that scene and reference back to it to allow us to infer the events. Great.

Must say, this chapter was awesome! 8D

Excellent update. I love her new jutsu. Its awesome. Keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next update.