Er, I'm glad that I'm able to finally review this story again, but I'm hoping desperately that it's updated soon. Anyway, I'm guessing that Aidan's younger brother will be meeting up with Lily soon, and I also think that Rose may have known Aidan in the past. Plus, I'm curious to know what the family circumstances were.

I can see Lily with both a Skitty and a Chikorita, and again, I hope that this is updated, cause it's wprth that at least :)

Hmm...I just might be wrong, but I guess Rose is the coordinator that Aidan met?

Hmm...I don't quite like this chapter, or the turn of events, but like always, I'll stick by. Of course, it is possible for such a child to have so many connections, but the power of coincidence...or luck...or fate...

A decent start, but I almost groaned aloud in irritation when there was the first mention of the legendarily overused starter Pokemon. But still, I'll *grunts in pain* stick by...to see...the results...since I'll...respect your...choices nevertheless...

Love it! Update soon! ;)

Other than that rude punk it seems like things are smooth sailing for Lily,but something tells me that some bad guy is bound to rear their ugly head and change that.

Oh, Aidan... oh. I sense something in the air. Haha. They're going to get together, right? :p
I can only hope that that show-off won't become Lily's love interest in the future. He's a jerk face that needs beating up BADLY. It would be fun to see him running after Lily though, who would keep rejecting him because he deserves no better, lol. But then it would be too much like the Lily x James ship in the Potterverse, perhaps because of your main character's name... but I don't think Pokéfans care so perhaps you should just ignore my previous remark, lol.
And how old is Aidan? I still wish Lily would be older though - you can still change it and I hope you will 'cause she seems mature, or perhaps you could skip a few years lol - because all this lovey-dovey stuff we ALL care about would be more plausible that way. It would be interesting to see Lily making friends in the upcoming chapters, then getting seperated from them, and then remeeting them years later when all the adventure had begin. It would be also a nice touch if Aidan would be only pretending to be the perfect Prince Charming to take advantage of Lily (cuz she was pretty) who would later realize that her sister is really there to help etc. But then again, this would all be much more plausible had Lily be older. Oh please, please change that, I beg of you. I think we're all mature enough to deal with an older character, most Pokéfans aren't children either. Haha.
Sorry, that was long.
And please continue SOON! VERY. very. SOON.
sorry i'm sugar high ;P

I liked this chapter. It was cute. I like how you did the goodbye scene between Lily and Rose as well. I like their names too, though it kind of reminds me of the Evans in Harry Potter (you know, Lily and Petunia :P.) I like Lily too, I just wish she were a little older, it's kind of a pain in the butt to read about small children... I hope I don't have to explain why, lol. I love Espeon too. She's a cutie.
And perhaps you could rename your fic "Journey to Eeveelution" cuz we all know where it is going? ;)
I love how Rose is so protective and selfless too when it comes to her sister. 3 How old is she? :)

I think a reader should be honest to be able to help the writer improve. So, here it goes. Ahem, ahem. lol
So I started skimming this chapter, because I really couldn't have cared less about her little shopping trip. I mean OK, I like shopping too, but I don't write like 10 pages in Microsoft Word about it, because even I'd be bored rereading it. NOBODY CARES.
And the rest of the chapter wasn't particularly interesting either, so I kind of skimmed the whole thing. Honestly, I found this chapter boring and if this were a series, nobody'd watch the next episode, presuming it had be just as boring and pointless as this one.
I read the end, which was by far the most exciting part of the whole thing, and that's kind of a bad thing... I mean wishing each other good night being the most exciting part... yeah.
Just being honest. :)

This is really good so far, I like it. It's kind of simple, but complicated doesn't always equal to intriguing, so I guess I shouldn't be complaining. I like your writing style as well, it's so cute. I like Lily as well, she seems plenty sweet! )

BTW, I gotta tell you that even though I suck at grammar, even I noticed some grammar mistakes in your text. A beta reader help a lot, I would know! Good luck in the future though! ;)

SHe's hiding her crush from her sister.

C.D.

She has a crush on him now.

C.D.

Man her sister is protective.

C.D.

I'm liking it by and by.

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Interesting.

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