Great job!

awesome.

that was really hot. delicious sasunaru pwp is my guilty pleasure i can never grow tired of. this was beautifully written. nice plot and pacing, too!

I think that was the best gift Itachi ever got Sasuke. *Wink*
"So, big brother, thank for that keychain."

That was so cute!

So sweet. This really stands up above the crowd.

Oh my god. After all these years, this is still my favorite sasunaru fic. How many times have I read this? You wouldn’t believe it if I told you. Well I’ve already lost count anyway so I guess I can’t lol but seriously, this remains in the top 3 of my favorite sasunaru fics of all time. This is just THAT good. Thank you SO, so much for writing this. I’m pretty sure I’ll never ever get tired of reading this time and again. :D

Research your smut indeed, I'm an art student and that gave my a little chuckle.

I love this little story so much it's so cute and just all out adorable please continue to write

O nice! I remember reading this year's ago, but I lost my bookmarks of my faves like this one! Awesome to reado it again!

Do you know how to get more than 3 wishes from a genie?

1). Wish the rule that you cannot wish for more than 3 wishes is demolished then wish for more wishes
2). Wish for another genie which will give you more than 3 wishes
3). Wish for the genie to be your slave meaning they have to do everything you say and instead of wishing command or ask for things and the genie being your slave will have to give them to you

i love this.

As passionate as I found the smut to be, the relationship that led up to the smut was very tepid. They were still in the "getting to know you" phase and didn't seem to have more than light crushes on one another. You can't say they were building up the UST during the date. It was incredibly tame, all things considered. Up until the smut happened, the most romantic thing they'd done was a little bit of hand-holding. It was hard to tell if Naruto was even attracted to Sasuke most of the time, yet once the smut started, they were going at it like it like they had some type of long-denied passion. Can two people who spent only ONE afternoon getting to know each other feel that type of passion and devotion to one another?

It was like the smut in this fic belong to some other couple, not this one. If you wanted a sex scene where Naruto was comparing Sasuke to Michelangelo's David, there needed to be a different buildup to it, one where the couple was far more emotionally invested in one another. You don't use lines like that on someone you barely know. Sasuke only found out Naruto's name right before they fucked. Good sex scene, but your character development needed some work.

I loved it. It was sweet, funny and extremely hot!
Thank you so much for writing it!
Love xxxx

new religion: PWP Gods

awesome!

can't stop the nose bleed! you really made my sasunaru day! *tears of joy*