Cute.

I know this was supposed to be hot and all, but it was also just so sweet :’) the first time they got to be intimate without the threat of being caught by their friends or a literal death sentence hanging over their heads, where they get to take their time and just enjoy each other. Peace is unfortunately a rarity for these two and it was nice to see them share a moment of it together.

“You know I love you, right?” Gaaaaaah I melted. To see Shadow so open and blunt about it was a bit shocking to me at first but then I realized it actually makes sense and if anything Sonic would be most likely to use actions other than words; Shadow spent a portion of his life in a tender, open friendship with Maria where they probably did tell each other they loved each other whereas while Sonic’s never alone per se, he’s usually in a care giving, heroic role where he needs to hide his emotions. Just thought it was interesting to think of it that way as many fics include Shadow being heartless and cold even in relationships but I think once he’s comfortable with someone he would have no problem expressing his love. Why did a porn fic prompt me to analyze fictional hedgehogs at almost 3 AM? Well I’m out of work due to the current pandemic and have nothing else to do lmao.

Ah, always gotta include something to break the mood, heh. Poor Shadow! He’s always getting the short end of the stick during their romps, first knocking his head on the cupboard a few chapters ago and now this. Can’t say Sonic didn’t try to warn him! Maybe he shouldn’t let himself get so carried away ;)

I haven’t reviewed the real chapter yet over on the main story but thank you for writing such an incredible fic. It truly is the best of Sonadow fics out there and personally my favourite fanfic I’ve ever read. Can’t wait for whatever else you come up with, whether it’s in this beautiful universe you’ve created or something entirely new :)

I’m speechless just wowww...
That was the best M rated thing I’ve every read, hot as hell but also hella emotional and loving!
The flow in your writing and the characterization I’m just, holy shit!

Wow I love this do much do more

I think you meant 75 not 73

I died of cuteness and a nose bleed

These are great! I love the humor you write into Shadow and Sonic's little sexual escapades!

I mean epilogue and more? Hell yes, but is anyone gonna talk about the "Some of it went into my eye" bit? Because I genuinely laughed out loud in my room. 10/10 best part of the whole thing lmao XD Good comedic timing

Oh god yes I can't wait to read Sonic being on top I can't wait to see their reactions to that experience. I've loved this chapter what a lovely way for the couple to celebrate their accomplishments!

Nice.
You always make these so hot.

Uggghhh why are you so good at writing Sondaow? I love the way you write their sex scenes; so loving and also so challenging. Their actions are so in character, and i love their mini power struggles during it. Sonic is wild and free, and he will only submit of his own choosing and to whomever he deems worthy of it. But once you have him he's yours. (Well Shadow's haha)

I love that and i love that both of them are willing to fight for it.

woooow this is all so goooood!
I really hope to see you add a chapter where Sonic is topping this time instead of bottoming. Your writing is so amazingly in-character that I know you would make it , I would assume Shadow to be incredibly shy (and possibly even insecure) in such a vulnerable position (what with being forced to endure abuse during his years on the ark) but I think Sonic would be able to make Shadow comfortable and willing.
Pleaaaase I beg of you I really want to see a scene where they switch roles. And it seems that a LOT of other people want to see it too. Give the people what they/we want! :D
Anyway, I am absolutely addicted to this story and I cannot wait to see what else you have in store for us.
Lots of love 3!

"Shut up I hate you"
Shadow is soooo romantic!

Wow everything is extreme!

I love this fanfic and I love you
Btw, I really need to ask: do you prefer Sonic as bottom or top? Please, I have to know. Please answer me :')
(excuse my bad english)