| Reviews for New Year's Day |
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Tanyeera chapter 1 . 10/8/2008 What was the purpose of the last paragraph? And Warren didn't seem to mind bothering Ryuji even when he was with Kotonoha on Christmas. Not much to say about this really... Glad that Ryuji is making a good impression. Oh, and Kokoro is cute! |
brave kid chapter 1 . 10/4/2008 hey well here is my review again,well this is a really cool chapter ok, well good luck with you other fics ok |
Mask Rider Roy chapter 1 . 10/3/2008 Talk about a new year's festival...now onto the review: - Looks like Ryuji gets to meet his future in-laws... - Ryuji seem to score a point of approval from Kotonoha's family...but Ryuji beter watch his action as he can't "make out" with Kotonoha while the folks are at her house (spending new year's day with her family is really a plus point for him) - Boy, Loki is a sure-hit killjoy telling the folks how Ryuji sucked at housework... - Teen titans? What are they doing here (well he did mentioned Beast Boy)? - Warren...hey, he's from Fang, right? So he has a wife and kids? Overall it's a nice fic, although there wasn't any actions here, but a good insight. Is this a one-shot or will there be a next chapter? |