Haha, my favourite part of this story is the familiar relationship between Duncan and the other cops, it was a great move to consider it should be that way since Duncan's family is plenty with them. Again, you're an incredible writer

Nice! I love the idea of Courtney and Duncan as roomies. *smirk*

this is a very good!

you really kept the them in character and i liked that alot!

hope you either make this into a story or make a side story where courtney meets duncan's parents!

I enjoyed this story, you realy should think about turning it into alonger one. Think about it.

xoxo

Temari's Angel

Fun, fun! I'm deeply amused with the idea of Courtney being older than Duncan too. Especially when he referred to himself as a 'minor'.

I liked the laid-back tone of the piece, it was casual and yet you were able to make it complex in the depth and the development. Duncan and Courtney were, as always, very much in character, with that little bit of difference that effectively makes them seem older. Heh, you may have said this was a one-shot, but I almost want you to continue.

I mean, come on-Roomates? The hilarity would never cease.

Anyway, very well done. It was an excellent read and it definitely made me happy. You have that effect on your readers, I hope you know. The dialogue was nice too; there's never an awkward moment where those two are involved, eh?

Keep up the awesome work!

~Kat

Amazing oneshot! You are an absolutely fantastic writer.

Btw, i think you did use the Canadian law enforcement terms right (though I wouldn't know I live in California) they didn't look weird to me. Seemed fine.

Please continue writing! You are awesome!

wow,

pretty g.

haha.