Dear DamienTwist,

I just want to say that I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. It had a lot of depth and the development of feelings and such was very well paced. I loved how you you introduced this story way back in chapter one and the prologue was definitely a nice teaser. I'm definitely going to read the sequel. By the way, you have a very nice talent at writing prose like this, have you ever thought of becoming a professional published author. I do believe you definitely have the knack for it and what it takes. Thanks for making this a memorable read for me. _

Sincerely,

Mikel J.

I've been reading your story for three days straight, taking breaks to sleep, eat, go on MySpace really quick, and watch Yu-Gi-Oh! The Abridged Series. e_e Good job, soldier. This was a very good story. And, to answer your question, I do NOT have a life, but I'm very proud of myself for that. :D

-_- I need the sequel.. I have my own addiction. To Yugioh fanfic.. for over 7 years lol. I stopped reading them for a long time but with my recent insomnia I needed something interesting to read and I resorted to something I knew I would enjoy. I'm a picky person when it comes to fics I read and if I find something I don't like I won't read it. But this is just such an amazing story, I read it all in 2 days. I'm usually a Joey/Seto type but I've indulged in a couple of Ryou/Seto. It's just such an odd and unlikely pairing but it has an amazing balance. And your story is by far one of the best fics I've read. I look forward to the sequel.. I feel cut off. Ha. Well I hope to see an update soon!

O.O

Joey... is posing as a member of the Russian mafia? That'll be interesting... How will Nicolai take this and what will happen with Ryou and Seto? What does Seto know of the gun in the doctors drawer?

Oh god that was so freking good!1 I just can't wait for the sequal. It sounds so freking good. Please hurry up

that was a wonderful story! i cant wait to read the sequel!

I'm so relieved that Dr. Teleshov adoped Joey :) Finally he can have the life that he deserves. Reading about the final beating made me cry and almost made me physically sick... :'(

I'm guessing the voice message has something to do with Seto's former addiction...

Can't believe there's only one chapter left! I'm eager to read it but at the same time I'll miss this story. I'm glad you're plan a sequal :)

Aw... Joey... Poor Joey :'( The guy deserves so much better than the life he's living... I'm happy for his epiphany and admire the maturity he showed in this chapter.

I'm happy that Seto is there for Ryou in his time of need and, again, proud that he is in rehab. He's doing the right thing by sending Mokuba off to be cared for as well. I am proud of him for facing is demons and improving himself as a person.

great chapter! im glad ryou found a donor and joey got some help. cant wait to see what happens next!

okee, now I read all the way through it and I've actually cried! that part when seto and Ryou are out in the storm is really sweet, plus when Seto decides to check himself into rehab.

still so kawaii!

OMG! this story is tense but so cute and well written. thanks for posting it!

XD

SUPER KAWAII!

AW! The poem and little notes Seto left for Ryou are precious! I'm proud of Seto for loving Ryou enough to check into rehab. I wish both of our lovers the best of luck in recovering.

This was a great chapter. Bittersweet, indeed. It was sad, but had lots of romantic things, I believe. And the ending was so nicely written!

Hope you update soon! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh god, there are too many things to say about this chapter...like when "death" came by Ryou at first I thought OMFG NO HE CAN'T DIE!...and then he didn't let Death take him and all. That was sweet. And at the beginning when Seto was writing with his own blood, that was kinda creepy but still great. The ending poem made me cry though! Brilliant story so far, hope the ending is just as cool

Its so touching.

I've known 2 people who have gone to rehab. Both died of O.D-ing about 1 year after...

Please make this story not end like theirs.

I love this story so much.

Its very well thought out.

Please let seto and ryou get better and live a better life because of it.

Thanx