The characters seem a bit OOC...

I liked it, is there a sequel?

With the Frost Unleashed, Arctic

This was a fun story liked the ending too

you made the timeline the same?even with a massive variable such as starkiller? this is a massive problem that I've seen writers do, you can't just follow the same timeline when you have changed the whole story

you turned starkiller into a pansy Ass Jedi? Why? He is gray at best. don't make him follow that stupid cose

Cool story i like it. Looking forward to more!

Also, I forgot to mention Porkins's sexism. What idiot voices the idea that women are inferior in a Rebellion lead by Leia Organa and Mon Mothma? Oh, and Winter, Leia's childhood friend is an accomplished Spec Ops/Assassin for the Rebellion as well. Besides, most of the sexists and racists exist in the Empire.

Perfect Story! Love it! Could you write a story about Jaina and Kento?

I love this story. It has good character and a happy ending without it being cheesy. :) May the force be with you.

i will fullfill your legacy, i will finish what you started long ago grandfather.

amazing story

admiril Allahu Akbar

You've got some good writing, and I know it's a but too late to have you make any changes, but for future writing I think more description would make the story a lot better.

That was awesome. Is there a sequel?

cool