Reviews for Vampire's Keeper
fallon0627 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
I like the flow of the story. It also has a interesting plot I hope their will be more history on the new characters. Look forwarding to reading more
SapphicJem chapter 4 . 7/11/2009
Awesomeness! :D
nessiepluswolf52893 chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
Pros:

This is really really really good!

Keep writing please!

Cons:

Try to be more clear about the dialogues :]

((like who's saying what))
yue chapter 3 . 4/7/2009
needs to imply jake i the story more more werewolves to this is giting good
bunnyxx chapter 4 . 4/3/2009
ah olz update cuz this is really interesting!
FALLING-ANGEL24 chapter 4 . 3/31/2009
WHens the next chapter?
LovingBlackParadise chapter 4 . 3/29/2009
aww is jake gunna show up and see them like that i think she should fall for zero that would be awsome
georgisakura chapter 4 . 3/24/2009
this is probably the first thing i have read that doesnt involve shiki or rima but yeah i really likes it poor jacob
Blue-Huntress chapter 2 . 2/17/2009
more plez! .
Taeniaea chapter 4 . 1/6/2009
great story
goldenlilies chapter 4 . 11/13/2008
oh god I was looking for this type of fic for ages, I love it love it love it am waiting for the next u[date
someone on the internet chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
I just want to point out that even if Carlisle was sent the blood tablets, he would refuse them. It would go against his morals. And if the Cullens drank that, their eyes would turn red, instead of the gold color we all love.
Remember The Darkness chapter 4 . 10/29/2008
e hee hee I bet tis jacob. Lol. Please keep writing, this tis a deliciously awesome story. I shall seriously consider killing myself if you don't. lol...im just kidding.. *cough**cough* Lol.

I do have one thing to suggust though stick to one POV for a chapter. Twill be less confusing.

NickleMT
KYAAZekifan chapter 4 . 10/23/2008
hey I loved this story so far. hope you update soon!
nat13 chapter 4 . 10/10/2008
please up date soon!
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