I am completely blind and have followed the Endervrrse series since age 15
I am now 22 and still have the whole series on audio
I also love Bonzo and truly feel for Pinual
I still cry uncontrollably when I reach the point of Bonzo’s death
U did a fantastic job on this fan fiction!

I've always wondered about this character and wanted to find out more about him, and even though this isn't actually Card's writing, it almost seems like it and I love it.

Ahh...
I've always wondered about Pinual. He's so INTERESTING because we never get to know like, ANYTHING about him, but NOOOOOOOOOOOO Card can't write some sort of little story about him. I was wondering if I was the only one. I loved how you tied Bonzo's heartlessness into this. It actually should work out how you wrote it. No joke.

Ah, this is good - loved the idea of Bonzo being messed up after witnessing it. Nice.

really, really good.

that was extremely well written! good job

I liked this, it was a great exploration of Pinual's character and his fascination with the Giant's Drink :D The ending with Bonzo was terribly sad and yet, it makes sense. I definitely think you should NOT go live as a hobo in shame :) So yes. Great writing, great work!

Interesting connection. I like it.

~Stormy

You actually liked Bonzo? Ah well, can't please everybody

I always wondered about Pinual...

This was very, very good. I like how you put Bonzo in there - that was clever.

This was so great. ...Yay.

-Jelly1029

Whee. Love Pinual.

Nice tying (not like that though) Bonzo in there as well.

But cool story.

Wow. That really explains why Bonzo be crazy in the head. Me likee.

Very nice. I didn't even notice Pinual until I read this. xD

Short, sweet. I like how you tied Bonzo in.