hhdhd I’m crying over Misa’s death and I’m also crying over how soft L and Light are ahdhhhg two types of tears and double the heart ache

my only criticism thus far has to do w formatting. the long paragraphs are very difficult to read and having multiple people’s dialogue in a single paragraph is very confusing, especially when there’s no warning for it. more paragraph breaks would be great— other than that this story is PERFECT ! I rly do love it a lot uwu

hfjdn im gagging over the eyeballs part, literal fear of mine

I love this so far tho !

11/10

Oops, sorry! I didn't read on enough! *Continues reading*

I really enjoy this fanfic,and I know it's old, but I couldn't resist reviewing it. Though it is good, it kind of confused when Light lied to Aziz about where they were going in the limousine.(Chapter 11) I thought they were being mind-controlled, so how could he lie? But it has a very interesting plot so far. Well done!

Koji Yamazaki? Can you tell the future or something?

I know I'm about five years late, but I love this. Words cannot describe how completely and utterly perfect this is.

OMG! I love this Fan Fiction! I cried at the end, the Suspense was killing me. I think the FanFic was well written and the plot was intriguing and very suspenseful, great job keep up the good work. :)

Why didn't L and Light ask if the people at the cofee shop knew or could recognize the guy who would be there with Misa? I mean she's famous so I doubt they wouldn't recognize her and they would probably remember whoever was "lucky enough" to hang out with her. They would have found him faster, but I guess that's the whole point. Anyways, I love the story, it's awesome.

Omg your the first fanfiction wtiter that didn't call L ugly! ! I love you for it,you made him all nice and cute! Thank you soo much! :D I think L is wayy cuter than Misa and light put together. I don't see why people make him uglier then a .. spider, your my number 1 writer thank you! :D you gave me hope for this death note fanficions ;)

Seeeeequueeeeelll...

Yeah. X3

Keep it up! 8DDDDD

Well thank god for that! I couldn't stand reading a sad ending to save your life either! Excellent story, though I will admit I was itching for a pen and some very special paper at some of those cliff-hangers.

This story is covered in fluff and soaked in corny juices but I still loved it. Vulnerable L had me Awwwwing major time in worry and adorableness. Never read a brain washing Kira that was not Light before so it was interesting. It kinda threw me off how much L cried and how he was unable to fight. We all know L is the bad ass of bad asses and he could kill a guy with a well place swipe of his foot but whatever. Loved it in its cheesy glory, specially the cute, innocence he portrayed( makes you want to corrupt him so bad) :3 Adding to my extremely long favs list so feel special. Luvs

awww, cute! :)

LOVED IT! now to the sequel! -runs over there-