Reviews for Wired |
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CaptainDorito chapter 1 . 11/24/2015 Beautiful |
Great chapter 1 . 9/3/2015 Oh heck... You made me cry! I love it and hate it when that happens. Although I feel like the ending is a bit weak. But it works. Looking forward to more! |
esoulix chapter 1 . 4/23/2014 I cried. Honest to god I cried. I never even considered Sam being afraid of Danny because of Freakshow. You thought it up and it was written beautifully... Five stars. |
Samantha-Girl Scout chapter 1 . 11/22/2009 Wow. That sure was deep, and insightful! I throughly enjoyed this oneshot (which I usually don't like to read oneshots... lol what a way to be reintroduced to the DP phandom!) and I can't wait to read more of your work! Seriously, this has some genious behind it. KEEP WRITING! ~Sam |
Sniper CC chapter 1 . 2/28/2009 That was a really great story. I even started to cry when Tucker was mad at Danny. It takes a lot to make me cry for a story. So congrats to you |
magdilen chapter 1 . 2/20/2009 Great job. |
magic or manic chapter 1 . 1/6/2009 This is very very very good. Are you going to update? |
spikesamoradora chapter 1 . 12/29/2008 Beautifully written and a perfect response to the freakshow incident. While I understand that DP isn't intended to be Buffy, I often feel that it would be better served had they included more lingering trauma over various events. |
Pure'Midnight chapter 1 . 11/9/2008 This story had me gripped from the first line. I couldn't take my eyes away. Absolutely fantastic! It would be great if you could write another chapter or maybe a short sequeal. |
Dwellin chapter 1 . 10/5/2008 oh my god, the angst every turn you take, every step you make... *blink, blink* let me catch my breath... What a brilliant piece, well written and had me chewing my fingernails to the quick. "Okay everybody, gather round! Group hug!" I was near emotionally wrung out by the end. Thank goodness you threw the reader a bone there right at the last. Otherwise I would be obessing on this all night. Still might need to make myself some hot milk! Some hot writing here girl! |
challengeAUTHORITY chapter 1 . 10/4/2008 god. you do angst so f*ing well. this one was crazy emotional. but holy crap, was it good. it kind of struck me all of the sudden while i was reading it, how dramatic you've managed to make these characters and situations that were meant to be a part of a children's show, all the while keeping the characters so incredibly in character. awesome, awesome work. i completely loved this one - it so toyed with my emotions. i love stories that do that. :D was that enough gushing for you? lol :P -cA |
YumeTakato chapter 1 . 9/30/2008 Very interesting story, It was good. |
TexasDreamer01 chapter 1 . 9/30/2008 *blinks* ...that took about two hours to read... great story though (because it's so long) brittney |
skitzofrenic chapter 1 . 9/30/2008 happy ending are fun and i was gunna say something, but i completely forgot. dammit. lol :D i'm such a fool. i absolutely positively LOVED thiss |
b4k4 ch4n chapter 1 . 9/30/2008 Wow, that was a really long one-shot. I haven't read a Danny Phantom fanfiction in such a long time. So she hid it for 3 years, I got to say, keeping that bottled up for so long...pretty impressive. Poor Tucker really misunderstood the situation. At some part, I thought this story wasn't going to have a happy ending. I mean, there was so much problems... Then again, the ending was a sappy happy ending either, it was more like a...'Lets hope everything gets better from now on' kind of ending. It was nice. Good work ) I've always liked how you switched to different views. That lets the readers know how everyone- Danny, Sam, Jazz and Tucker -feels about the situation. I felt kind of bad for Tucker. He was truly left in the dark for so long. I love how loyal and caring Jazz is. Even though she's suppose to be studying hard she instead dumps it and leaves to aid her brother. Anyway, nice work you two ) It was great reading a Danny Phantom fanfiction. |