Reviews for The First Warrior
WarriorsCre3d chapter 1 . 3/13/2018
Thank you for changing my life.
michaelmccrea026 chapter 1 . 8/4/2017
can you please enable your pm so I can talk to you
MorganSkylar chapter 1 . 11/3/2016
put oc tag! is it that hard? your oc is the main character! and i don't even see aslan anywhere. why did you put his tag?
SimplyxBeautiful chapter 9 . 4/10/2016
this story is amazing
SimplyxBeautiful chapter 1 . 4/10/2016
So sad but love the story
Siriusly Potter-tastic chapter 29 . 2/11/2016
I just wanted to tell you how this story means to me, every single time I've read it I cry. And not like the girly 'sniff' 'sniff' crying but full out puffy eyes, running nose and endless tears (yes I look horrible by the time I finish reading the last word).
I'm glad you didn't abandon this story and I would like to Thank You.
So Thank You for keeping up my spirits, faith and imagination.
that one girl chapter 29 . 12/29/2015
I haven't read anything this good on the internet for a long time. When Miranda died I had tears running down my face and fanfictions normally never do that. In all honesty this should get a medal or something for the incredible amount of feels it gives someone. You should be very proud of your work.
Guest chapter 29 . 10/22/2015
Thank you for the story it made me laugh for the wit cheer and cry for the victory's and sad parts thank you
S3rgeant-Sarcasm chapter 29 . 9/28/2014
I know that I have read this story soooo late, but it is really beautiful. It's so beautiful that it made cry and grab tissue like 20-30 times, and blow my nose because I love this story... Even when I tried to stop I couldn't. Somehow someway this story has touched so much... Thank you for not listening to that reviewer and quit.
Jimworm020 chapter 29 . 4/30/2014
I started crying at like chapter 17 and I didn't stop shedding tears until atleast 10 mins after I finished reading the story, I even had to take breaks in between chapters and heartbreaking moments to just cry heaps. I haven't cried like that for a story ever, so thank you, I didn't think I would be capable of so much emotion from someone's writing
thaliapunkgoth123 chapter 29 . 5/19/2013
OMG AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA*SQU EAL* THIS IS THE BEST FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ IT MADE ME LAUGH AND CRY YOU ARE A BRILLIANT WRITER AND PLEASE PUBLISH THIS TO THE WORLD.
Sophia
Jesus' girl 4ever chapter 29 . 11/3/2012
Wonderful!
Guest chapter 29 . 7/16/2012
wat bout susan
IshBabe1497 chapter 29 . 7/13/2012
i love this story!
Dandy352 chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
A reader suggested this to me :) I think it's good and written well :) Great job!
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