| Reviews for Observations |
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Hyouton Inuki chapter 2 . 12/30/2011 It's extremely crazy! So hilarious! |
KaidaWarrior chapter 27 . 3/8/2011 Oh oh. I would like to read the awards! Very funny chapter, I loved it. :3 |
Himadesu chapter 2 . 12/6/2010 Regarding the sandal thing...yeah, that does happen a lot in manga, doesn't it? Depending on the author, though, you also get the occasional hilarious save-the-world-in-sock-feet scene, so I can forgive the ones who sacrifice continuity for expediency. :) Though, maybe we're supposed to imagine that they have servants that follow them around with their shoes, so they can be ready to leap into action at any moment? *grin* (Hey, it worked for the old Japanese nobility, lol.) |
Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 29 . 9/29/2010 Really? I've not heard of this. And define "pure script"? I mean, I have a story up in basic script, but it has dialogue in it... |
Crimson Cupcake chapter 29 . 9/29/2010 First thing's first: Chapter update was epic! xDD I never realized Ichi's still 15! And how long has Bleach been running for? 5 years? (He really ought to turn 16 soon xDDD) Awesome idea Second thing's second: I completely agree with you. Although I never posted unreadable stuff on here (or at least I hope I haven't), that's just ridiculous. Your point is right! (If they kicked people scoring under 70 perfect out of school, I'd be out by now xD) If you just delete people, how are they supposed to get better? This is ridiculous . Some of the reasons he's deleting accounts/fics is stupid. Seriously, about the rooster thing? That is the most ridiculous thing I have ever heard. Some of the stories might have really good potential if you just up the grammar a little, but if you delete it, it'll never get better and the level of writing won't actually improve. ... (alien 8D) |
Writing bunny chapter 29 . 9/28/2010 Ichigo sure is busy. And I agree with you about this Lord Kelvin. Authors have to learn somewhere. |
Sky Painter chapter 28 . 8/31/2010 BEST. VERSION. OF CINDERELLA. EVER. |
KaidaWarrior chapter 28 . 8/31/2010 Your writing is absolutly amazing and all of your observations are funny and I love to read them. I wish I had somehting to contribute to help you out but nothing comes to mind at the moment. I look forward to more of your drabbles. |
NorthernShinigami chapter 28 . 8/31/2010 ha! i knew it reminded me furuba's cinderella... |
Writing bunny chapter 28 . 8/31/2010 So you actually followed my advice? Good. Though, I already wrote about this idea myself, check the first chapter in my Bleached thoughts (you may check the others as well.) I didn't think to combine it with Cinderella, though. It was hillarious. |
MattsyKun chapter 28 . 8/31/2010 Its true. Shunpo'ing out of ur clothes can be a... Useful technique. XDDDDD |
readingQueen chapter 27 . 8/19/2010 Oh poor poor Renji Abarai... what has he done to deserve your wrath? ;P I love this fanfic, it's hilarious! I also realized how people (captains) are always ruining their haoris and reappering with them. Don't they have a budget or anything on clothes? For instance Soi Fong threw off her haori when battling Yoruichi, and the poor haoris are always getting torn...And also, when their zanpaktous are destroyed, like Zangetsu and Zabimaru, do they just go poof and reform, or something? Anyways, update soon~ |
Writing bunny chapter 27 . 8/16/2010 Why does Hitsugaya even keep Matsumoto around? That should be another observation. And another one: When Yoruichi, Soifon and Byakuya dodge at the last moment, they leave a piece of clothing behind. What if they had to do it repeatedly? |
Writing bunny chapter 23 . 8/16/2010 Hollows and Arrancar can run around with big holes through their chests and heads, so why should a little puncture in the stomach bother a shinigami? Besides, wasn't there something about your chance to survive grievous wounds depending on your reiatsu? |
Writing bunny chapter 17 . 8/16/2010 Oh, funny. And there is a scene in DDR where Hitsugaya stops concealing his reiatsu and it starts snowing. |