| Reviews for Sort of Like King of the Mountain |
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Anonymous is a pretty bad name chapter 1 . 8/8/2012 I love this! :D |
NewImposter chapter 1 . 4/26/2012 Fantastic. I've never read this paring before this story, but you made me like it. |
IanPhilippe chapter 1 . 2/6/2012 Awwwww. I liked the game between them XD poor Bruce, having to deal with an idiot like Tony XD but they are an awesome match. |
Paradox de la Paladino chapter 1 . 11/10/2010 Interesting story, I liked it. However, I have a large critique. You jumbled the story and didn't separate the paragraphs when different things were happening. That makes it hell for the reader to know what the hell is going on. One second its morning, then Tony is talking to Pepper at night. For the future, please write paragraphs. |
Aria Stargazer chapter 1 . 5/8/2010 Interesting pairing! :) |
Lex chapter 1 . 3/30/2010 This one I find better than the one I read earlier. There's a bit more of an atmosphere to it, you set some more tone, though again I find the surplus of dialogue is pulling away from some of the mood. Other than that, quite well written, I find you capture their personalities well (you of course would know more about them than me though, so for all I know you may feel you completely messed them up). And I HAVE to point this line out, "Bruce brushed his nose against Stark's[...]" lol I'll never get used to that. |
minoki chapter 1 . 11/30/2009 woot! very nice |
spinstitcher chapter 1 . 6/1/2009 lol, this was greatly amusing, the dynamics between them are just... perfect. :) |
SetInSmoke chapter 1 . 5/6/2009 Tony's so tactless sometimes... "I didn't know you were gay." I facepalmed. Great story! |
Krad's Girl chapter 1 . 4/10/2009 Wow, i read your batman, kiss kiss bang bang, iron man story and had to read more so i read "Sort Of Like King Of The Mountain" and it rocked. you have such a good feel for this pairing i salute you. few authors i have read could have pulled such a pairing off as well as you have and so i congradulate you great read keep them coming |
Berry chapter 1 . 3/17/2009 This was sweet, you really got me to like this pairing. My only question is why Bruce/Tony always have to adopt in your stories. Not that there's anything wrong with adoption but if Bruce/Tony wanted to continue the Wayne/Stark lines they could easily get a surragate. Heck, Tony has created clones, and Lex created Kon-El by mixing his and Superman's DNA so they might not even need a surragate. |
spiel chapter 1 . 2/28/2009 “Would you want to be known as the villain that kidnapped a super hero’s gay lover?” I'd write you a nice review, but my dog's looking REALLY~ cute right now, so I'm heading over to my bead instead ;D |
glassneko chapter 1 . 2/8/2009 I love this! My god, do I love this. This is so in character for both of them, I can absolutely see them trying to best each other like that. And especially the end, "About that-" Hilarious. (editing note: at one point you have patients, when it should be patience) |
Destinyawakened1 chapter 1 . 1/26/2009 So, so, so wonderful! I wish there were more tony/bruce fics! |
Viviane Renard chapter 1 . 12/22/2008 I like the playful competitiveness and head-butting you give to their relationship. If there's two things to be critical about, it's one: that the ending felt rushed to me (not the transition from challenge to 'let's make out,' but rather to the alarming 'I want to marry you even though we're not even technically in a relationship yet') and two: there's no dividers to signal jumps in the story. Other than that, a very enjoyable read! |