Update...

really wish there was more would love to know if Tayna was using her powers on Edward and what trouble those 2 will bring

I like this story it is nice and story, not dragged out!

I think that Edward is a bastard and if he tries to get Bella back I am rooting for Jasper to tear of his head.

Hey, I know it's been a while since your last update, but I would love it if you continued your story. It's really good, and I love what you've done with your plot so far.

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I'm glad Edward has seen the light LOL...I just don't get why he threw his morals out so suddenly...to go from waiting for love and marriage to fucking a whore ? it just didn't add up

its like he threw all his morals right out the fucking window...it makes so goddamn sense!

I really don't like that your making a fucking joke out of the mating bond...ya know? them thinking so and so was their mate...then not...then someone else...and recycling each other...its fucked up!
and in no world should bella be brother and sister with Edward...wtf? and e with t? wtf? shes a goddamn WHORE! like for REAL...a WHORE and he can read her mind! its soooo not ok

why in the fuck is Edward letting Tanya be such a fucking hoe bag to bella? and everyone else is letting it happen too...that disinfect comment...no one fucking said shit! some fucking family they are...this is total bullshit

that isn't believable at all! hes known her for like 70 years! it took 70 years to feel the mating bond? yaaaaaaa ooookkk...and hes a mind reader...and shes a sperm dumbster...succubus is just a nice word for whore and shes been at it for 1000 years...don't you see how unlikely them together is?
no one even fucking likes Tanya...why drag her into this? why not a new vamp...then at least your story would seem more believable...dumbass

Another great chapter and wonderful story! I loved every word. Keep up the good work.

Another great chapter, although I was hoping that she would catch the scent of some humans and attack them. I would've like to see Bella slip up on her first hunt and act a little more like a normal new-born, instead of having instant control like she dose in Breaking Dawn. Oh, well. Still a good chapter. Keep up the good work.

Another great chapter. I really love this story. Keep up the good work.

Another great chapter. I'm glad Carlisle sent Edward and his bitch of a girlfriend away. Keep up the good work.