A well written story, thank-you for the time you put into it.

Tears came to my eyes as I read this. Good job.

Beautiful! Very nicely written and points to ponder.

Oh, this was really good! I'm glad you wrote this. Alloran is one of my favorite characters! :3 It's cool that he wrote about Aldrea too. I was thinking recently of writing something about Alloran and Aldrea on the home world.

Anyway - great character insight! :3

I just wanted to say that i adored your character analysis pieces! they are very poignant and give me much to ponder

Great story. I like the look you take at someone who does not normally inspire sympathy. (You might want to enable annonymous reviews, by the way.)

Oh my gosh...this was fantastic. So well written, so in character...I don't think many could have written this so well. I love it. *favorites it*

I. Want. To. Cry.

That was so sad! Sweet, but sad! Poor Alloran!

I like the turn you took with his character. He always seemed a bit cold and mean to me, when I first read the books, but this gives me a new, different understanding of his motivations. His feelings.

I found your description of the complications of birth intersting from a scientific standpoint. It makes sense. It's hard to give birth to a child,-I know this from reading, not from experience, mind you-and it's probably even harder when that child has a tail-blade and is shaped similarly to a centaur.

I enjoyed this story. I look forward to reading more.

-t3

Wonderful story. I really liked how the Ellimist's quote had become an Andalite proverb, nice touch.

I'm not sure Jahar would have had a sister-Elfangor implies a population control law in "Andalite Chronicles"-but that's contradicted several times anyway.

Well done.