Please update soon! I like how the story is going, very interesting!

love it

Update please.

I like your story and it is very interesting. Though, there would be times where it would slightly become confusing but nonetheless it's a good story. I hope you would continue updating it.

is it discontinued already? I still hope you would continue it because it's such a great story :((

hey this is epic u hv to continue it!

Nuu more pls :3 Good job!

Continue.

honestly I think your story does not lack any visual imput nor any odd inferences about most character. My only concern is the way of sasukes impression in the story though the outline of it seems very well put. I admire your creativity in task like these to visualize such a story. I would recommend however adding in a few little details of Sasukes sensitivity and annoyance in the beginning will influence or impact the readers thoughts. Towards the middle he could definitely get touched by her love or more so by her acceptance and his value to her (captivity) in a sense where he will remain in place of his own charater yet still fall for Hinata. Overall it was very nice. I insist or rather hope for any further chapters and finish story piece.

such a very good story,keep up the good work! :)

The story is very creative and exciting. I enjoy It. Also, please continue the story soon. I really want more romance between sasuke x hinata. Also, this story should be rated mature for violence and if you add some mature scenes with hinata x sasuke if you get what I mean lol. But the story is great so far but if you add more mature scenes with it your more likely to draw more people to your story. But I cant wait for the update and I hope you use my advice. :)

NOOOO DONT DELETE IT ! ITS SOOO GOOD! PLEASE DONT DELETE DONT DELETE!:(((((

I really like this :) It's really interesting and suspenseful :)

I know it's probably a long time from when you updated this message, but I just wanted to tell you that this fanfic was one of the best fanfics I've ever read and that I want you to continue them. These chapters weren't messy as you think. I would never be able to write something like this from myself alone. Right now it's sometime in April, 2014. You actually probably won't read this at all. Just writing this just in case you would and if you even still are active when writing and looking at your reviews. So see ya and have a good time writing!

Jennessa (Applause)

P.S. You probably think of me as one of your silly fans, right? Well, I probably am...so these words might not mean anything.

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