I admit it was rather brilliant. Even though we coulda' done without the sex. Like, they're /children/. Why.

It would've been nice though to read a version of son of Neptune with this au. And the power sharing thing could've been a nice thing to explore with, I dunno, /actual/ blood exchange (accidental of course). I'd honestly take blood over anything else any day.

This was literally amazing. I think I cried.
But one plot hole: Percy and Grover have an empathy link so wouldn't Grover die when Percy killed himself?

i absolutely loved your story!

Such a sweet couple!
I wish you could write more chapters!
Please!

Byt thank you for sharing this beautiful story :)

awwwwwww

This is how TLO should have been like
I fucking loved your story and the plot and alsjsldjslakks pernico!
Very well written and beautiful
Xx
Ps: why not write a sequel that is set during The Lost Hero or The Son Of Neptune?

I can just imagine Aphrodite giggling the whole time they did that in just the same way Percy described how his class sniggered during sex ed.
(This is a great story, by the way.)

I love this story! And I don't know if you planned this, but I find it ironic that you had percy kill himself on his sword. because Roman generals used to commit suicide by stabbing themselves with their sword. And they're Greek.;)

gods that was so beautiful jesus christ i've been looking for a good rated percico fic for ages why did i ever stop reading this the first time i came across it i'm such an idiot just-

Okay, I'm calm. That was amazing! Thank you very much for writing this.

That was AMAZING! The story-line was brilliant and just perfect! It was overall just ... WOW.
Yeah that probably sums it up, WOW.

I just found this gem of a fanfiction on an old rec list and I just...wow. You writing is comparable to Rick Riorden's. I felt like I was reading another book in the Percy Jackson series! The characters are exactly on point and I read with the same perspective I did with the original PJ series. Well done!

:)

Aaw... That's really romantic... Not too cheesy but good, amazing even... Love thiz!

Idk bout u but I'm feeling 22

I think you should make a sequel, but I dont know if you have already or not. If you have YEA if not please consider it