mamoru should probably be on medication. he must have multiple personalities.

oh so darien killed serena's father. He is the one killing all the people. I wonder if serena is ever going to find that out.

I bet Alan is the killer, if Ken knew his face.

At first I though that Serena's mother was going to marry darien, untill it was Alan. If she married darien that would be so wrong.

Ahhh yet again, Another amazing, unique story.

Solaria sunstone xxxxx

I definitely love this better than the Lyricist. Darien was unstable in that one too but they actually ended up together in this one :) Awesome job. One of my top favs!

Omg! I LOVE this story! Amazing job!

Wonderful story, as usual. Would you write a sequel?

(: I'm so glad I read it! I almost didn't!):

Nice story just no offense but they just freaking fuck each other and not go out on like a single date that I've read so far! You should've at least made them go on a couple of dates and then do it with each other! Also he already declares that he LOVES HER! really! But anyway good story and I Knew that darien was the serial killer I had a feeling inside and I hoped it wasn't but IT WAS! Also I can't believe that Serena would betray Andrew like that and go do it with seiya and Serena's future father in law! Also I hate how ilene treated Ken and Ann is a total Bitch and Alan is just discusting, dude your her STEPFATHER ! Also I can't believe that darien killed her father why why! What did Ken do against you Darien and I hope she finds out and at least cuss him out and give him a piece of her mind after what he did to her! Anyway GREAT STORY I LIKE IT

oh my goodness, I found this story just the other day and fell in love with it. It was simply wonderful. The dark intrigue, the well everything. It was just perfect. I'm glad I found it! Thank you for writing and sharing it _

wow...that was... AMAZING! totally getting faved

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OMG. This is seriously twisted. I thought was him from the start, but I was hoping it wasn't. I can't believe she stayed with him. It's all so weird and twisted. Kept me on the edge of me seat though. I couldn't stop reading it.

I never read a story that makes me feel conflicted. It was so... twisted and almost disturbing but then understandable. I don't know. It's odd. Darien's a serial killer and he killed his wife's father, but she doesn't care because she loves him. And... just the whole picture.

BUT THAT DOESN'T MEAN I DIDN'T LIKE THE STORY!

It was different which is okay. It wasn't normal but who cares right?

I think the writing could have been better. It gave me a headache at times and I had trouble reading it. Whatever, though.

Nice job and keep up the good work. Ah, Darien is so sexy! :D

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One, Darien being a serial killer is kinda hot. But then at the same time, I don't like it, especially since he killed Serena's father, let her get raped, and played by his family. To me, that's not Darien. I don't know. I'm curious to see how you're going to make this a happy ending for my favorite couple. I just don't know how someone like Serena would want to be with the man who killed her "beloved" father.

But I get the whole serial killer thing. I'm writing a story with him like that too. It's called "Will You Be My Valentine". It's exciting writing about his dark side. :)

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