Hahaha, laughed A LOT at this one!

They all would implode if they only knew. :)

LMAO!

“So do I, McKay.” Sheppard stands with his hands on his hips. “I’m a pilot. Got to have a strong stomach.”

They arrive back at their accommodation and Sheppard pauses outside the tent looking pale and sweaty all of a sudden. “Oh god, I don’t feel so-“

ROTFLMAO!

Very good. :)

*giggling* Nice ending!

I loved the peeks into reality after one of the team makes a suggestion or statement about what they think happened. :)

Oh crap! Talk about miscommunication! I'm bummed, they so needed that ZPM (LOL). This was good. I like the way you told what happened as they realize things about themselves. Nice. Thanks. Read you later...k

Well, this was just plain wicked, though for some reason I simply can't stop chuckling!...I'm STILL chuckling!

I thought I was going insane from laughing that much, just by trying to picture them all...

And the flash backs, that was just pure gold!

you're a genious, seriously! XD

Lol nice one :D

Very hilarious, but also slighly depressing at the end. Another great story :D

"Put that away with the other twenty"…lol poor team Sheppard! This was great!

wow 21 zpms bummer they couldnt remember they might have been able to go home with cloths and plenty of power :)

Oh, now that's just sad, but so funny! Silly team :D

I'm laughing to hard I'm crying now. You made my day. I love your whump stories, but you should write more humor stories. With whump. Of course.

Thanks for writing.