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Dezzi95 chapter 11 . 8/11/2018 Love love love this! |
GhettoZorcress chapter 11 . 5/7/2018 O MY, more plz |
Hmm chapter 1 . 3/15/2018 I remember reading this story a while back (like, years). Now that I've read what I've read, I came back to this expecting a good read. I don't remember this story being quite this,... bad. It's nothing personal, but you should definitely look into a beta for your stories. You move FAR too fast with little to no explanation about the who or the how. ESPECIALLY the "battle" between Harry and Voldemort. You have Harry use the killing curse straight away,... then do some super powerful reducto into the ground causing a 20 yard crater. If he had that kind of power, why would he use a curse said to hurt the soul of the caster on VOLDEMORT of all people. Then let's add more to the pot on this same scene. The Killing Curse,... on Voldemort. After all Harry has gone through,... all his friends have gone through,... killing his parents for him. You let him off so FREAKING easy. Painless death with no satisfaction. Sorry, don't buy it. That's just from chapter 1,... and honestly I didnt' want to read anymore because I'd rather keep my memories of this being good, than re-read it and hate it. |
RiceFlower chapter 11 . 1/23/2018 Every time I read this story, I want to read more. This is one of the best crossover HP stories ever. Most seem to have Harry end up with multiple Xmen as mates. Nice to only see one relationship develop. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2017 the fact his chosen name is almost voldemorts own is just wrong |
pupstarstar chapter 11 . 3/18/2017 So Hot! Please write more! |
TashaLee2476 chapter 11 . 2/12/2017 I hope you continue this soon. Keep up the excellent writing. |
917brat chapter 3 . 2/10/2017 This is a very interesting story that I would really like to read more of so I hope that you update it again soon. |
Guest chapter 11 . 1/3/2017 I love3 . But where is Xavier? |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/25/2016 fucking faggot |
mattdombast chapter 11 . 8/18/2016 Brilliant |
AnimeFreak71777 chapter 11 . 6/12/2016 I love that last bit! :D |
MoonGoddess111 chapter 11 . 5/21/2016 Please update soon! |
mayawene chapter 11 . 4/15/2016 wow c'est chaud |
FictionGobler20 chapter 11 . 4/3/2016 so I'm a new reader and I have to say I'm in love with the story I've added it to my favorites list and I can't wait for an update!please do so soon I can't wait to see what comes next |