My heart is now shattered. Thanks.

w-wow...that's...dark I love it but that's really dark

Oh, gods AND godesses, that was frikken SAD! Jeeze, I don't think the can be anything sadder than this...TT

Still, good writing...

That was beautiful.

I felt like crying.

these are kind of sad, but i like them.

This is such a beautiful story. I love how you wrote this. APPLAUSE for you. ] keep up the awesome work!

That is really sad. It seriously brought tears to my eyes. I loved it. It sorta reminds me of Madame Butterfly. Except that Link ended up loving her which didn't happen in MB. If you don't know the story you should look it up. It's an opera. Really, really tragic too.

I liked this story. It had a really nice ring to it. The short thoughts added to the mood and made me feel the pain she was going through. They were a nice touch. I'll definately be keeping an eye out for more of your writing.