Awesome story loved reading it

Thankyou. DottyWho. 22.10.2014.

This was fabulous. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Well done!

Oh my Lord! I do not have the words - there aren't enough adjectives spoken to adequately describe how amazing and brilliant this story is. I was hooked from the very beginning, and I have done nothing else since that beginning but read this, from word one through to 'the end'.

The plot twists, the deviousness and sheer viciousness of Strain, the scope of the story - I don't know how your mind concocted it all, but it all makes for addictive reading.

I was particularly touched by the triad of Jack of the past, Jack of the present and Jack of the TARDIS memory. Three different men all inhabiting the same broken, lonely, scared and scarred human being. I have to admit that seeing Jack onboard the TARDIS, seeing him through Ianto's eyes, and reading Ianto's feelings about him, that scene brought tears to my eyes. I too want Jack to experience that feeling of lightness again.

Anyway, the way you concluded your story, the cliff-hanger you created, makes me unbearably anxious to know what phase three will be, and how soon you'll write it! Please tell me you're going to write it! You have a true gift for suspense and story-telling - you keep your readers right on the edges of their seats!

Wow! You should send this away and see if they'll make it an episode. You know like the fun ones they make for Children In Need because this was very good. All the characters were how they should be and the plot was fantastic. It was awesome and I enjoyed reading this. Congrats.

Love this D

The relationship between all the characters just felt right and it was wonderfully written - just like a Torchwood episode!

,Paddy

I hope you write a sequel soon! _

This story was amasing! You seemed to have left it open for a sequel, will there be? I hope so. Keep up the good work! _

. . . Well, if that wasn't a setup for a sequel . . .

this chapter with the glimpse inside each of the other's memories was brilliant. This whole story keeps getting deeper and more satisfying.

Keep going please.

. . . Well, why not?

Brilliant! I didn't see that one coming. More please!

This is a brilliant fic; a well-written, clever story with all the intermingled flashbacks and interludes into Ianto's mind. I also like how you've combined different elements of the show in- there's a good mix of action, sci-fi, humour etc. Looking forward to more!

Great story! Please update soon.

Argh! great update! Please more soon!