HAHAHA OMG. They are so awkward and adorable I love it! Oh Mal... -sigh-

I really like your stories of zoe and Mal's friendship from the war. This one especially!

"Leather and sweat and a hint of gunpowder identified his pillow." My favorite line and a wonderful description. Very powerful and very appropriate. Thanks for sharing.

Cheers Jen

Great fic about pre series Mal and Zoe. I always love these. Love the last bit.

That was amazing! And lovely! And fantastic! Great job.

Mal’s mind flashed back to the image of Zoë’s left hand on his head while her right blasted their enemy from this life, and he was grateful beyond measure that fate had thrown Zoë his way. They were indeed fighting a war, but there was no making do where Zoë was concerned. Mal knew there was no safer place in the ‘verse than next to her, and he aimed to stay there as long as humanly possible.

This sums up Mal and Zoe perfectly!

Love this fic! Mal and Zoe war fic is so rare and special and you've done a great job of giving us a little snippet of what their world must have been like. Very true to character and a wonderful read - thanks for sharing!

Ha ha! Great writing! I love the image of Zoe comforting with one hand and killing with the other; it's totally her personality. Great job!

Very good Mal/Zoe friendship fic.