Such an amazing piece of work you've made here. A new take on Byakuya's thoughts as he saved his sister (which is naturally one of my favorite moments in all of Bleach). I love how flash step and his connection to Yoruichi are tied into this too, they weren't really mentioned much in the show, were they?

All in all, beautiful writing!

What do I think? I think: Holy SHIT that was amazing! I've been looking for stories like this the entire time I've been on this website, and yours is certainly one of the best I've read about Byakuya and Rukia. Good work, this is absolutely stunning *joy*

incredible. hmm. i seem to be using that word a lot. i'll have to find a new adjective soon. however limited my vocabulary, this was an astonishing (ha!) story. i thorougly enjoyed reading it.

I never really thought about what Byakuya had in his mind before he managed to save Rukia from Aizen.

Yoruichi must be proud of him :)

Awesome writing skills, keep it up!

Oh my god...

It is so well written.

Byakuya managing to beat Yoruichi by 5 steps just in order to save rukia.

So sweet!

Write more!

very good