I think this story is great! I do have something I think you should look into though... Beautiful Monster by Ne-Yo. When I was reading the story this song kept coming to mind. Check it out!

Very interesting. You wrote a story were you keep reading because you wanna know how the characters turn off, congrats! Gonna check the sequel now.

Fantastic, great job!

why do the volturi need an interrogator when they have aro? that doesn't make any sense.

Thanks for sharing your story, I really enjoyed it!

Great story! Loved it!

I really love this story! It's interesting to see the different characteristics that Bella takes.

Wow, what a sad chapter. Edward makes me mad with how careless he is with money. Hopefully everyone will have a HEA.

Wowwww very different fanfic I mean Bella part of aro n his brothers bt poor her she was feeling all Alone despite having Felix wid her n woww Felix lovee her n even demetri aww everyone lovee Bella n den omgggg shocking carlisle n Bella were lovers too bt he left living behind her awww n den whole Alice Jasper situation thnx to dem Bella got to understand wat she missing n den she met Cullen family n fall in love wid dem bt den volturi came n I loveee wat she did wid volturi destroyed dem woohoo n den cuteee ending Bella Edward together wooohoo lol loved da story

wow i love the story i can't read it all now but i will come back

Cute story!

Wow...this was so unpredictable and just, wow. I don't think I've read anything like it. Love, :)

you had meworried for a mo..no hea? ha good one.

beautiful words...

you deserve more reviews mate!

ha edward you lusty teenager..!

I was genuinely glad no one could read my mind.