this should have been a scene in the actual book

Hello Irish Froggy,

I read your story The Streets Of California in German. But since I like would read the English version of the story like but you do as I have experienced have taken from understandable reasons from the internet, I wanted to ask you if you have this story and whether or not you are to me please could you send it by mail. About an answer I would be happy.

Yours truly

Christina

I loved it.. So true Edward and a lovely moment:)

Sweet and beautiful.

This was so beautiful.

How very sweet! I loved it!

this has to be the cutest story ive read...great job

Oh my goodness! This is perfect! so cool! You know what, that is one of my fav parts in BD. I was lucky to find it! Thanks for writing and sharing it. you are cool! xD

awww! So beautiful!

Woah...what an amazing one-shot. I feel like THIS should be in the book! hahaha

I've always wondered what would be in Edward's mind at this moment in the book and I was pretty much blown away by how well you captured it into writing. By the end of the chapter I let out an irritatingly long "AWWWWWWWWWW!" xD

really well done!

-riddiculusvampire

So cute! Aaah!

Something like this should have been in Breaking Dawn. The book was freakishly long, what's a few more pages? I really enjoyed this, it was a nice change from all the humor stuff I've read today. It was really sweet, and made me smile.

Jacob does belong there, Edward, sorry to brake it to you. Jake did ruin the moment though which sucked.

I loved how Edward just couldn't hate the baby once he discovered it wasn't a monster at all. If only Jake could have understood.

I think my favorite thing though had to be when the baby "Mine" and Edward explained what kind of mine it meant. It was heartwarming. I think you captured Edward's mind and the baby's just perfectly.

Very well written. Great job! :)

This was incredible. You're a very good writer. In Breaking Dawn, I was a little confused as to certain things that were happening, but this cleared things up perfectly. Stephenie Meyer would be proud. :p A few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing too serious; this story makes up for everything.

I love reading about Edward reading Renesmee's thoughts!

aw so cute! loved it. great job :)