Kinda hate your story, I mean it is really lame!

I honestly have no idea whats going on in jenny's storyline

Needs more enter key. Slightly ooc. Still ok

It was ok and kind of confusing. But more ok

I love that Blair's didn't want to retaliate against Jenny for turning her down and have her, her own choice whether to join her clique or not. And didn't want then to humiliate her after the rejection, allowing her to make her own choice. I don't blame Jenny for saying no as well. She just wants to fish high school without having to deal with popularity contests and mean girls. I love the way Chuck and Blair acted so couplely. I love how he asked Blair if he was being a good boyfriend. I think he's so new at it, he wants to make sure he's being good at it. Audio nice shout out to 1x18 and how you contrasted the quote from it. This was great to read from start to finish.

Yay, everything worked out for everybody, even Dan. I like how in the end all he really needed was the support of his sister. I just loved their scenes together in this fic. Jenny was so supportive of Dan from what he was feeling from Serena. He may have been angry with her, but he'd never stop caring about her. So I'm sure he just have been feeling conflicted at the hospital. I'm glad he was able to find some middle ground and find a way to let go of his anger. The Serenate reunion was amazing. I've always had a study spot for them. I'm glad that she still harbors feelings for Nate, even after all this tike and this tone they don't have to worry about how Blair or Dan night feel about it. This tone they have a real shot to make a relationship work.

Your Blair and Serena reunion is exactly how I could have pictured it and better. I'm glad they've needed fences and she's Queen again. I like Serena, but she just not cut out for being Queen. That's Blair's role. She can only be cold for so long before it catches up to her. She's just too nice and caring to be queen. I love that Chuck saved her. They've really grown to care about one another as step-by-step siblings. Leave it to Chuck Bass to casually be waiting for Blair in her bedroom. He knows how to make an entrance. I loved his big speech. He just wanted her to be Herself and not some artificial version of herself. He wants the real Blair he knows and loves. The one who cares about Serena and wouldn't turn away from her. I love that he fought for her this chapter and they he finally told Blair he loved her.

Looking forward to reading your epilogue in the next day or two.

That Jenny and Serena conversion is so sweet. That Jenny came to apologize to Serena was very touching. She may have originally plotted to bring Serena down, but in the end she didn't get through with it, so I don't think she's complicit. I don't think she'd intentionally hurt Serena in any way. It seems this is Serena and Blair's Rock bottom and their breaking point. The question is will it be enough for them to make a break through and piece their relationship back together. This is something they needed to figure out on their own, it's just unfortunate it took these perilous circumstances to push them in the right direction. I'm hoping everything will work out for everyone in the final two chapters.

So sweet of Her to comfort Serena. I love that she takes her mask off around Nate and shows her true self. It seems she's finally starting to crack and let her mask Slip and show her true self. I also liked the Nate and Jenny scene, Jenny is always so honest and open with him and poor Nate doesn't think before he reveals to much, kind of shooting himself in the foot. That last scene between Chuck and Blair was so sad to see them end this way, but hopefully it won't be a permanent end to their relationship since there's only a few chapters left. I get where both of them come from. Blair is afraid of losing Chuck, knowing that their agreement has an expiration date once everything goes back to normal and I think that frightens her and Chuck just wants Blair to be real with him. Maybe him fake breaking up with her will give her a push in the right direction and help Serena.

I can't say I really blame Dan for being upset about the whole situation and taking it out on Nate. He probably thought they were sleeping together, while he was dating Serena. I don't think he knew the full context of the situation. And Serena is now caught in the middle of it. Dan was hurt, so I can't blame him, I'm still hoping everything will work out in the end for Serenate and Dan too. Chuck and Blair were adorable in this chapter. I love they they just didn't run away from what happened between them in this chair and they both realize their feelings, even if they can't admit it just yet. If course the only thing to interrupt them is a phone call. I like that Jenny has confided in Eric over the whole situation. I think their friendship is adorable.

I love that Serena is starting to care about Blair again and be concerned for her. Being Queen just doesn't suit Serena. She's far too kind for thst. She chooses to see the best in then, whereas Blair likes to see the truth. Chuck's plan is brilliant. He knows Blair and Serena so well and understand that they need each other. It seems when Serena becomes Queen, she doesn't really want it, all she really wants is her best friend back. If Serena thinks Chuck is just using her,, he thinks it will help Serena see the light to come to Blair's rescue and help them become friends again. Finally has admitted to herself that she loves Chuck, but I don't think she'll tell Chuck unless he says it first because I think she's afraid he'll break her heart again. I loved Dan and Vanessa'it' friendship and I hate that the show ruined it. Reading then he makes me think of the good old times between them. That Serena and Nate conversation was intense, but really good. I love how Serena didn't hold back on telling Nate exactly how she felt and showed her vulnerability to him. In this fic I really want them to end up together. This fic is so good and am looking forward to reading another chapter tonight or tomorrow morning.

wait is Chuck really using Blair or is it all apart of done elaborate scheme to get Blair and Serena to reconcile? I hope he was lying. I thought he loved her, even if he hadn't been able to say it out lots yet. That scene at the beginning was so intense. It seems to me Serena didn't really want to be queen, but feel she has to be to impress her minions otherwise it's be admitting defeat. It was sweet of Chuck to stand up for Blair to Serena. I like that he Comforted and reassured her if how strong he finds her. I love Eric and Serena's brother/sister friendship. Eric is so observant and can always tell when something is amiss. And doesn't shy away from confronting her about it. I loved the Serenate flashback. Even though he just broke up with Blair, it's clear he still had lingering feelings towards her and Serena felt them back, even if she couldn't be with him then because of Dan. She loved both him and Nate in that moment, but went chose Dan. I think it's Honorable of Jenny not to get involved, believing Serena and Blair have what it takes to move past their current trifle.

I love that Chuck took care of a sick Blair, that was really sweet of him and I like that all he wants from her out of this arrangement is for Blair to be real with him. He doesn't want her to be fake or insincere. He just wants her to be authentic even they're together, even if their whole relationship is fake. I love how observant Eric is. He's able to read pretty much anyone like an open book. I think you do such a great job writing him and I enjoy the way you write his dynamic with Jenny. I love that you've included Nate and Serena interaction and how he's trying to be there for her now. He's trying to figure he out and be there for her. I also think you're doing a great job writing the Dan and Jenny dynamic. You have it so sit on. He ofc knew something was off with Jenny and that there was something she was keeping from him. I think he's acting out of concern for Jenny, but now he knows about Serena's hidden feelings for Nate on the same day he told Serena he loved her. That's got to hurt. Because now what should have been an unforgettable moment for him is now tainted by this letter.

I don't blame Chuck for being so angry with Blair for being angry with Blair. She is being incredibly fake with him and I think he can sense when she's not being herself, especially with him. I think he also wishes what he has with Blair could be real. Serena is starting to crack under the pressure of being Queen by b through Looks of it. She's starting to realize being Queen means but caring about her friends and family, otherwise it's showing weakness. I think she knows Blair is coming to get her throne back and that Chuck plays a part in that send that is why she ordered Penelope was sent by Serena to seduce Chuck, knowing it would affect Blair and her plans to get the throne back. Glad Chuck rejected he and hope he will continue to do so. I don't think her attempts will be finished just yet. Nate can be so protective of those he cares about and that's why he's urging Jenny not to do what he's doing. Knowing it will hurt not only Serena, but it will cause Jenny to lose who she is in the process. It's clear he's caught on to the fact he wants to destroy Serena with the info he wants.

loved that Chuck came to see Blair about Serena. I think he knows he so well that he knew Blair should have been the one there for her, knowing deep down she still cares about Serena. Loved the chuck and Serena conversion. She misses Blair. I think even Serena is beginning to realize that she's not cut out for being Queen, especially if it means losing her best friend in the process. Because they means she'll have to be colder, which Serena just isn't. I also like your Dan and Jenny Conversations. It's clear she's trying to take down Serena more because she hurt her brother than it is helping Blair, thigh she's happy to help in that arena too. The Nate and Jenny conversation is good too. Nate still clueless to whatever it is Jenny's planning against Serena, or about Serena's letter to him. Looking forward to reading your next chapter.

I loved reading Chuck coming to Serena's rescue. I adore their sibling friendship. I think at the end of the day, as angry at Serena, Blair may be, she just wants her best friend back, along with the throne so this can go back to the way they were between them. I think Serena's going to give it increasingly difficult to please the minions and they'll continue to play their games with her. She's not cut out for being Queen like Blair is. She has too big of a great for that and to be queen you have to become more ruthless.

I like the scene between CB. If only it was real between them, but I don't think of either of them are quite ready for that yet in all honesty. The kiss between them was quite hot too. Also Chuck's interaction with the nerd was quite interesting.

I'm curious as to what Jenny's getting Nate involved in. Will she discreetly, without altering Nate get his help in gathering certain information on her quest to take down Serena? I look forward to seeing what every Jenny's up to and what she needs Nate's help with.