So cute, thanks for writing ;)

I think this story is wonderful. It's touching, tender and sensitive. the love between them is so *real*. Thank you!

I think I like best those stories that provide us with moments that show the warmth and deep sense of love these two characters have for one another. You did a lovely job of showing Laura's decline and the strength Bill lends her through his caring. Thanks for sharing.

Nice short story. I don't want Laura to die. Thanks for sharing.

"Think you could take me, Old Man?" I bet you he was thinking the same thing I was. So cute. I simply adore your writing. Loved the ending. :)