How can you have him lose to Paul ugh

Wow. That was really heartwrenching. I almost cried at different parts in this story. Great job. The shold make a movie about this.

amazing story

A great story! I've read a couple of your stories (except for the Ikarishipping ones cause I kinda like pearl) and they are amazing, full of drama, and very descriptive! You are probably one of my favorite writers! )

good story

Sorry but i would have moved on if i was May i mean at the end he chose Misty this was a stupid story what was the point

Oh my fucking god i was actually tearing up on this story..So sad and happy at the same time...If only the anime ended like this..

Elxlent work! i hvn't cried by reading a story for a long time :D Keep he job up! x3

nice

perfect story i wish they could do a movie out of it and again great story

This story moved me.

About half of the story, my eyes were filled with so much tears for May it almost spilled over.

Yehey! good ending for May! Idol!

Make more good stories like this, please! D

im not someone thats into romance or anything but i was very moved by this if you can make me love romance then you can do any thing your the reason why i now read romance books and fics you my friend are a genis

p.s make a sequil or something about may and ash pease this was great i really enjoyed this

love is complicated because if it wasn't then people would fall in love with the wrong person for them too easily. i know this from personal experience. you have explained my life through this story, i had the exact same conflicts in my life, i hurt someone a lot and was to dense to realise it, now we've been together for 9 months and everythings going near perfectly. if you haven't already, i hope that you find the person that is right you.

Felix

Alright! Now that's a story. Poor Ash though, making him go through hell with three girls loving him. And from the show, i never knew Misty loved Ash. Thatz a shocker. As for May and Dawn, well i saw that. As for Drew, wat a prick. I hate him. He annoys me.

The bottom line is that i enjoyed this story. It was very entertaining to read. Actually, i couldnt stop reading. Sixteen chapters and i finished it in a matter of hours. Good writing. Keep up the great work.

Bravo! Bravo! They should make this a movie out of this.

Fantastic story. *cries* I loved the way this ended. I just want more. I want a sequel. I want a sequel to this wonderful story. (I spent a whole hour nonstop reading this)