It's strange how you were able to keep everyone in character AND keep the sense of an old Yogi Bear cartoon. You did an amazimg job and if I didn't know better, I'd say you worked on the original show itself. So tell me this, why aren't you working on the Yogi Bear CGI movie instead of the dillweeds up in Hollywood? I mean, you captured the sense of the cartoon flawlessly, so why can't they?

The characters were accurately written, and the story was cute.

That was a really cute and funny story you got sounds exctaly like a Hanna Barbara Yogi cartoon. Liked Boo Boo attempts at getting the girl to like her. Actaully I created an OC to act as a girlfriend to Boo Boo but she a polor bear. Anyway exllcent work.

What's up? This was a magnificent "Yogi Bear" story you thought up. Boo-Boo Bear, Yogi's best friend, has a romantic interest in Honey Bear. Of course, things go awry when Yogi intervenes. And you keep Yogi true to form when he steals a picnic basket ("picanic" in Yogi speak). Your love for Hanna-Barbera cartoons like "YB" is why you should keep writing fan fiction. Yogi started out as being part of "The Huckleberry Hound Show" in 1959, then in '61 he got his own show. Have you seen the movie "Hey There, It's Yogi Bear!"? I sure have. Come December 2, 2008, it, along with "The Man Called Flintstone" (which I also saw), will be released on DVD. I hope you'll buy them. Peace!

Yes, a story that finally has Boo-Boo in it as more than a cameo role. And its good too. Seriously you got the characters down very well and the whole plot was in keeping with a Yogi Bear cartoon. Definitely worth a faving.