This was freaking hot, epic and a perfectly lovely sexy way of fixing it. And Aeris rocks (and I can't still stop laughing at Zack dishing it so hard at the beginning, and then getting the gay-panic when shit got serious). That last bit was a terribly entertaining way of taking a peak at the future, and I really liked how you wrote Zack's intelligent jester POV's throughout the story (I liked predatory Sephiroth's and stalwart stubborn Cloud's too, but that one really applied to the end, and the beginning point).

Excellent romp this. Thanks for sharing with us

Hahahhahahahahholy shit i can totally see Reno participating in that shitfest of offerings

I'm dead. RIP me. I anticipated the sleeping thing but didn't even consider a shower. Omg.

F.Y.

I was a little skeptical on this but this chapter convinced me. I like it a lot. I like the concept as well.

If you do go ahead with writing Zack sleeping with SephCloud in a threesome; would you terribly mind putting up in the A/N a warning and please forewarn us if your going to change the pairing. Please? I would gracefully bow out and wish you the best of luck from reading the rest of the story. Since, it's not my cup of tea, lass. 3

It's just hard to find good, well-written SephCloud fics being the main pairings. Of course, there's the iconic and big name fics that everyone knows. But there hasn't been any new quality blood lately, which is a pity for this fandom. However, I have stumbled upon yours, so I should keep crossing my fingers then hopefully. There's still a chance. Anyway, good luck. 3

Aerith and Zack are so adorable together, though I feel like Zack no matter how attracted he his to Seph and Cloud wouldn't sleep with them; he's a principled guy and has strong loyalty to his chosen mate. It fits his character.
Anyway, love this chappie as it answered certain ties.

I love your writing and I know you usually write Seph/Cloud/Zack mainly, but I really would adore reading this story with SephCloud as the main pairing.

Your an incredible writer and I look forward to Cloud's family lineage mystery and the powers that come from it. Since, he was able to master Cura. The portrayals are also spot-on and perfect. Good luck. 3

nice! and you did a good deed and killed hojo! :-)

this fic is perfect because:
-) non-time travel Good Ending AU
-) CloudSeph
-) Jenova and Hojo dead
-) librarian(?) Cloud
it's a shame that it was just a fanfic, not canon. I still angry with the game because too much WTF.
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Ya know, when Zack met Vincent sceen I thought they looks cute as a pair, or bros. But then I remember Aerith and I honestly can't hate her. She just so perfect with Zack.
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Aww I want to see Vincent's interaction with Cloud and Seph, but you already 'end' this fic... it already 7 years since your last chap, and it nearly impossible if you really want to make another bonus chap.

*overjoyed cackling*

I actually visualized a chibi-Seph bouncing up and down chanting "Sleepover! Sleepover!" when I read that bit. I love it~!
Despite their technical ages, in a lot of ways Seph isn't any older or more experienced than his younger friends- unless you decide Genesis and Angeal did a good job taking him under wing and educating him in such things. I suspect it's only because of Zack that it actually feels like a sleepover, though- any such adventures within the "Holy Trinity" likely lacked the atmosphere, them being too mature in some ways to induce it and probably having had far too many nights sort-of shared as bunking during missions to leave any group-crashing out back home feeling too different.

That last thing has me dying on the floor! :D Great story, it was a pleasure to read it. Thank you for being an awesome person and author. :3

Um, I just wanted to say that I know it was a short review and not very clear but... I felt that that sentence told you how much I enjoyed reading this fic so... I hope I don't hafta be verbose to get you to understand how great I think this fic is cuz... I'm tryin' to cut back and be simple but understandable. Bye!

I laughed until there were literally tears... almost and now I can't stop grinning! Thank you for that!

*cracks up so HARD* dear heavens, I think I sprung a rib - totally worth it!

But, oh yes. Magnificent storytelling. I'll just... *trundles off to think of amazing things*