what a great story i hope you make another one as great as this one!

A very interesting and good plot. But it just seemed a little rushed. Though there were spelling mistakes they weren't too bad. This just could've been longer or maybe a few chapters.

w It wasn't bad at all! It was very cute. Vizard-Hitsugaya is very-very intresting! Hope to see more HitsuRuki from ya!

Pretty least in yours'neither died.