I know this is so late but I love your story I've been reading a lot of Bella and Jasper fanfics but this is the best that didn't include Alice and Edward you know what ing

I like your story but some parts don't make sense like bella being a vampire but dreaming? And your bella x edward storyline was kind of out of place I mean he kisses her once and all of a sudden she loves him even though they haven't spent anytime together?

love the story.

Your story is very interesting, but I have a few questions. Why is Bella able to sleep after she becomes a vampire? Vampires don't sleep and don't get tired in that way so that's not possible. Also, why is Bella able to cry after she becomes a vampire? Vampires can be sad and look like they are about to cry, but they never produce any tears. Yet in this chapter she does so I'm just a little bit confused. Thanks!

Oh Jasper is so sweet. I wish I could just buy him for me. Again I wish the Cullens existed in our world. I'll continue reading tomorrow I'm to tried now. I love the story.

So did they explain everuthing to Bella? Wow that was fast for Jasper and Bella? Not that I mind. I just can't stop reading.

I like it although why would she want Jasper to leave. Gosh if I had Jasper Cullen in my room I think I would die. Ha ha aw I wish so much that the Cullens exist. One thing I don't like to much is the long paragraphs they make my eyes hurt. I love the story though. I have to keep reading.

Ugh Rosalie is so mean. That bitch threating Bella like that. I had to read the line twice that said Alice was at Bella's house. I just didn't bbelieve it. I love the story so far. Oh and I think I figured out why Edward doesn't like Bella. My guess is because he can't read her mind. Ok I wrote to much time for me to continue reading to find out why Alice is at Bella's house.

What's with Edward is Bella still his singer even though this is a Jasper/Bella story right. Ok I"m goin to keep reading to find out. Love the story.

Ah that last line gave me chills. I have to keep reading. I like your story so far. I'll review as I go.

its a great story, I hope that you find your inspiration to finish it soon!

omg u like lenka too? her voice is like, so cute. it reminds me abit of alice. anywayz, kool story. update soon please. maybe eventually jasper could propose? and maybe a trip to the volturi for some reason?

anywayz continue writing!

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great job. can't wait for more!

ok, no offense

i really liked it, until the whole thing with edwardthat was just stupid

its a good story, i just hate the bit with edward

that would never happen! what about alice?

and then you had to ruin it even more, killing edward

sorry but it ruined the story