Very nice. lol Pooooooooooooor Shiro

.God... I started crying ! It's so sad :(

I love it! Even if you did this quickly, you made it really emotive. Thank YOU for writing it.

And where you wrote: 'It makes my heart ache to think that I could die and you wouldn't shed a single tear.' MY heart started to ache!

Thank you for the virtual invisible cookie, too

...*sniffle*...*sniffle*

So...beautiful! *cries uncontrollably*

Are you going to continue this? :D It would be suuccchhh a great story! Yet, this works just fine as a short one-shot all the same... -

Good job! :D

-mRsDaRcY ;3

That was so deep! I love all your stories! They feel like they need to have a chap added ta it！！！ so add one or two r kagillion! Your stories are kick ass and ya need ta notice that! Update! They are excellent!

Poor Shiro..I wish I could hug him and give him all the love he ever wanted! This is so sad..yet it's gave me inspiration for a topic I have to write for a school contst! Thanks!

~Strawberry-Ringo

Hey! Awesome Job I Loved It! And I Hope To See Lots More Awesomeness From You! Great Job!

This is the most emo emofic ever emo-ly written.

that is actually very wonderfully written! you sure have a talent, dear. :3

Keep Writing!

~~ HOC

hum interesting very emotional