to bad this is dead as I really wish you would revive and update this as it's a very nice story even if it's from 11/12 years ago

idiotic guest ... Riful isnt OC... shes from Claymore so learn your anime and weep from your ignorance

AMAZING STORY. I LOVE THISSSS. Keep up the amazing work.

This story is fucking awesome

BAHAHAHAAAA I am So glad he is Ranked as an Abyssal one! I wonder if he will try and create new moves? Can he use Mokuton?

I hope he learns the quick sword technique

I REALL hope he learns something new! Keep it up!

Hope she never screwed him. Can't wait to see her start something with naruto. Hope they start Young. Would love to see him create a Unique power before he awakens. Something that sets him apart from the rest

I don't see it as a trade of "one monster for another" you'd be AMAZED at how FICKLE people can be... even in IRL... the ATOMIC BOMB was thought of as a great "peace keeper" a while ago, and it ANNIHILATED how many civilians? NOBODY cares if a monster saved them, just that they WERE saved... It's human nature... Nobody gives a crap HOW you saved them, just that you DID... (end justifies the means)... It's MORE so prevalent in the naruto series... NOBODY CARES what he can do, just that he does it for the right reasons!(If this wasn't the case, they'd never ALLOW nuke-nins, they'd never put UP with orochimaru, and spies would be impaled at the front gate!..and danzo wouldn't be a threat, he'd be a JOKE!)

Once again, making the OC too powerful, you realize the series is called "naruto".. as in HE SHOULD BE THE ONE DOING things, this is why sasuke is HATED... An OC fades to the background, otherwise it's a mary STU...

Don't really get this one, ninjutsu, only needs handsigns to "sculpt the users chakra" and "refine his/her will".. aka.. they are POINTLESS if not using chakra and you WANT to do it, I personally think they are FAR, FAR inferior to almost ANY other power there is... I mean seriously, stop their hands... cripple them, cut them off.. and wham, no more jutsu! yet MANY people, (increasingly an amount as the series goes on)... needs NONE... Also how do tailed beasts have "jutsu" when they HAVE NO HANDS?... Seems like a stupid concept!

I always thought power-yo-yos were funny in stories, Naruto has APPROX. 3-4 years after graduation, then he's GOT to be able to KILL SS-RANK people, I mean people that think themselves GODS and nobody contradicts them... He has NO TIME to be beaten by gennin, chunnin OR jounnin... He's gotta be able to FLATTEN them... (no matter HOW skilled they are)... He's gotta become the WORLD KILLER in very little time. (I never understood, O.P.)... Goku goes from getting his butt kicked to TOYING with the ultimate B.A. of the universe in like 3 seconds, and drags it out, just to show him how pathetic he is... EARLY in the series.

I wanted more :(

He said 10 years later... hehe.

Ch 6 . So Zabuza knew and the predjuse and distrust especially when technically She is a demon was resorted to two lost innocent lifes.

It reminds me Prototype in a way . Will they do it like Alex Mercer in those techniques with their Yoki ?And also Yoki could be used for normal elemental jutsu . Kuubi in one of the stories combined Yoki with chakra and in proper spin the Yoki heal is perfect along with other things and maybe Wind fire and earth are the best to be used with it .

ch 4 Currently , Pupetry is perfect for Riful and Naruto because his ahem condition . And to use ninjutsu or magaic or whatever is to imitate the nature of the element and use the energy to manipulate it .