love it 3

Loved this story.

I think you perfectly portaited the way how Canderous thinks and added some depth into the character. I can very easily imagine him looking thoughtfully on a piece of metal and thinking how he should attach in to the doorframe so Bastila won't just march like that into the hangar ever again without knocking XD

Also the Leviathan scene was pretty realistic. Canderous' resistance and protectiveness about Mission, Juhani's reaction in the prison, the post-Leviathan scene.

Good work! *thumbs up!*

i think you should continue this. Id like to see what would happen next.