| Reviews for Time Heals |
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Guest chapter 51 . 8/19 I do not understand why this story has so many favorites. It is badly paced, shallow, and full of grammatical errors. Even the distasteful smut is pretty badly written, romanticized terribly without actually being romantic, and I would imagine that the author has never really had sex. The character of Cassandra was embarrassing to read— an obvious, hyper-sexualized, immature, 'evil hot girl,' absolutely mental 'villain,' present solely to be an irritant to Anna and nothing else. This is the sort of villain written by thirteen-year-old girls. Such a teeny-bopper trope does not belong in anything higher up on the totem pole than a ridiculous High School AU, which this might as well have been! And I say this because of the excessive number of teen romance tropes throwing Anna and Nuada together. Speaking of which! Anna, despite being the lead, was dead boring, her trauma uninteresting and her reactions pointless. She had no true plot to herself. Her recovery had very little structure or logical follow-through. And Nuada could have been worse... but he was rather shallow. The other characters amounted to little more than cardboard cutouts, their interaction with the story focusing mostly around Anna despite her being relatively unimportant to literally everything. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/15/2018 This is such a good story so sad it's not finished |
Death's Angel 3000yrs chapter 51 . 3/4/2018 You need to finish this story, it is amazing. Simply amazing. |
Guest chapter 41 . 11/16/2017 Lol they're both wrong, he shouldn't have gone easy on her, and she shouldn't have reacted so explosively towards him. But it's little fights that make relationships stronger because they are addressing how they really feel towards a present issue. Plus considering her isolated background she hasn't had many opportunities to practice expressing what emotions she feels and he may not see it in the same perspective as a human would so it makes sense they would come to a disagreement. :P Glad to see they're back on track now ;) love it definitely adding this story to my favorites :D |
Guest chapter 19 . 11/14/2017 OHHHHH MY GOD this is awesome! :) I love the plot twist with annas powers it's kinda like she's a Angel from doctor who lol ! Cassandra such a bitch lol the interesting ;) it's nice to see that nuada has a kind side. He may be a bit too kind, maybe he needs a bit more possessive if ya I mean ;) ;) ;) love it! Can't wait to read the rest! |
BethanyTheStar chapter 51 . 11/16/2017 Awesomeness ;) |
Lillalil chapter 8 . 6/3/2017 Enjoying your story, it's so sweet and exciting |
SaruwatariAsuka chapter 51 . 5/31/2017 Oh wow I actually found this story two days ago and did a binge read. It's actually really good and interesting. I love the bit of humor you have thrown in, also love how you have kept the characters as IC as possible. I would love it if you updated, but I know your muse for this story probably packed up and took a permanent vacation seeing how it has not been updated since 2012, but that's okay! We all move on I guess! Just wanted to post how much fun it was to read, and stuff c: |
acetwolf94 chapter 51 . 4/13/2016 I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! |
Queen-Lizzy22 chapter 51 . 4/25/2015 So i am obssesed and would really appreciate if younupdated as soon as possible! Please! |
MissAliceLovely chapter 51 . 4/6/2015 I love this! |
FreeSpiritSeeker chapter 50 . 12/23/2014 I absolutely adore this story. I know you haven't updated in forever, but please, please, please do! |
wanda lensherr chapter 51 . 11/24/2014 So hawtt *fans self* I love it still. Plz update when u can until then I ll rereaad this awesome storry! |
wanda lensherr chapter 13 . 11/24/2014 I love this story! |
HelleNielsen82 chapter 51 . 9/9/2014 An amazing story! I do hope you will continue this at some point. Its too good to forget :) |