Beautifully hilarious with a nicely dramatic touch!

Funny! I like it.

Oh. This was fun. I really loved the character interaction here. I found both characters spot on and believable. Wonderful job.

*grin* Oh. I so liked this story.

Nice work. I love the interactions.

*giggle*

Very interesting twist on the Red Alert suspects everybody theme...and I like how you write Smokescreen - He's not a safe mech, but even Red has to admit he has his uses )

Fun story. Entertaining and well paced. Interaction between the characters was pretty well done also.

this was good )